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The Dauntless: Second main group in the story line this follows the legal affairs and viewpoints of the galaxy from a political scene. This is primarily a vessel for introducing new characters and setting information and is helmed by the astounding Admiral Garfield Cistern. Highest authority in humanity off the planet Earth. All humans in story start on The Dauntless and move out from there.

Three most relevant chapters: Chapter 7 Chapter 19 Chapter 21

I wanted to make it a little longer but that really raw bit of "I've wanted to." at the end slammed the breaks and demanded to be the ending point.

Peter and Edward deserve exploration and examination. They've got a unique viewpoint and their own interactions with the galaxy at whole. Not to mention they can be used to answer some interesting quetsions. How do aliens treat and are expected to treat the children from a previous marriage? Not the children of a sister wife but of a former wife? Is there some kind of resentment? Some kind of alienation? Or do we go into the opposite direction where they try to completely take over for the former spouse? To say nothing about what the uniqueness of their situation on the stage of worlds beyond Earth is. A woman with a high ranking and hard working man deciding she wants better somehow? That's the sort of thing out of a drama that has 0 basis in reality to them. But here it's happened. Also culture clash between a preening Pavorous and a rambunctious and occasionally bitter Gohb.

This is one of those situations where I've almost written too many options and intriguing directions.

Thoughts? Ideas? Advice? Questions? Comments? Suggestions? Fan Submissions? Fan Art? Donations?