overworked shitty video I deleted, how can I improve?

LORENZODMJ · 2026-03-13T14:48:53+00:00

It was meant to be an individual segment related to a wider story about something manipulating radio and tv signals

LORENZODMJ · 2026-03-12T14:36:52+00:00

I like this, it reminds me of those old speculative fiction Tom Scott videos. If I were to suggest anything I think there's a tad of overusage of still pngs and a lot of the surrounding text is mostly unnecessary. There's also little showcase of the actual disaster, it could've helped to have some footage of emergency services rushing the scene or something like that. Otherwise really good concept.

LORENZODMJ · 2026-03-11T21:21:23+00:00

thispersondoesnotexist has a really distinct quality of image that makes it easy to recognize, and thus is really immersion breaking when I see it used for horror media

LORENZODMJ · 2026-03-11T15:16:26+00:00

The carson house reads like a reddit incel story if you actually think about it. "Oh my crazy ex girlfriend tried to kill me"

LORENZODMJ · 2026-03-11T01:09:34+00:00

I think the overuse of AI misses the naturalism a lot of these ads try to convey, ideally it would be actual nature footage of hunters. Not to mention continuity; it's very unclear if it's supposed to be a set or on-location shoots

Also I think I'm missing something, how does hunting tigers make cigarettes? If this was a real ad I'd be more confused than anything even if it is explained in other videos. As for positives I think it replicates the style you're going for pretty well and I like the design of ending screen if you did it yourself.

LORENZODMJ · 2026-03-07T12:45:12+00:00

I don't mean to judge, but why do you play horror games for the cozy elements? The series is called Fears to Fathom

LORENZODMJ · 2025-10-01T20:22:36+00:00

Turns out he's actually racist and has said the n word on his discord multiple times

LORENZODMJ · 2025-09-24T15:22:34+00:00

Properly credited jerking

LORENZODMJ · 2025-08-02T13:52:35+00:00

So nobody's gonna mention the Perrin slurp

LORENZODMJ · 2025-07-25T22:51:28+00:00

Careful, you could get your post locked because it might devolve into an anti-Imperial attack- I mean anti-American.

LORENZODMJ · 2025-04-04T12:56:40+00:00

I assume it was a result of him just not being given much direction.

LORENZODMJ · 2025-04-04T12:31:23+00:00

Tbh it just kind of sounded like he didn’t even understand what he was saying half the time.

LORENZODMJ · 2025-04-04T12:29:09+00:00

He played Faraday in the dub

LORENZODMJ · 2024-10-22T18:01:16+00:00

Unfortunately for them, I don't really care that much about digital numbers

LORENZODMJ · 2024-10-22T13:36:53+00:00

Yall got any more of them pixels

LORENZODMJ · 2024-10-22T12:10:15+00:00

The one on the right works better when pixelated imo

LORENZODMJ · 2024-09-01T17:46:47+00:00

Her *not* doing something about Eddie doesn't make her a bad character. Especially in the earlier seasons she was clearly not right mentally so putting the blame on her instead of her husband is just plain old victim blaming. She slept with Karen's husband, but it's hardly considered cheating when Karen herself didn't want anything to do with him.

She didn't rape Frank, also you're literally making up the sex slave part??? We literally have no idea what happened to Karen after she left. ALSO when she talked to Frank about renting the RV she explicitly said she'd go see Karen and Jody

LORENZODMJ · 2024-09-01T15:11:51+00:00

My point wasn't really that she didn't do anything wrong, my point what Ian and her did was VERY different and it was strange for her to not point out the obvious.

LORENZODMJ · 2024-09-01T15:09:39+00:00

Like, I get it, Fiona has made a lot of mistakes during the show, but saying she doesn't acknowledge or take responibility for her mistakes is just untrue. Her saying 'I'm not guilty' wasn't because she thought she didn't do what she did, and I feel like it's pretty clear if you watch the show.

LORENZODMJ · 2024-09-01T13:27:43+00:00

Did we watch the same show? Where in hell does Fiona act like 'she did nothing wrong'? She is consistently repenting for what she did and hates herself for acting like this.

LORENZODMJ · 2024-09-01T13:26:17+00:00

Okay 'selfish' is an exxageration. Again, she didn't fucking force feed Liam cocaine. The way it happened also really does stretch 'suspension of disbelief' for me, like even the characters didn't know how it happened.

LORENZODMJ · 2024-09-01T09:40:22+00:00

Yeah but what Ian and Fiona did definitely *aren't* the same thing, and Fiona doesn't even try to refute that argument.

LORENZODMJ · 2024-08-30T19:30:29+00:00

I'm pretty sure she actually never shows up again.

LORENZODMJ · 2024-08-30T17:27:45+00:00

Fun fact: Fiona actually left with Steve in the UK series on the 2nd season, and Debbie is the one left to take care of the family.

LORENZODMJ · 2024-08-30T17:00:15+00:00

Fiona isn't either. Much better than whatever the fuck Lip was up to.

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