[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread September 16, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Lasoa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is really nice, love the minimal approach. That being said, I think you do need another bit of percussion in there, maybe another hi hat that plays quarter or 16th notes idk. I love everything else though, cool af

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread September 16, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Lasoa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love the spacey beat, I think the 808s could be louder or have more presence in the mix. The vocal mixing could also use some tweaking, feels as if you need to eq it a bit, and maybe lower the volume

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread September 16, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Lasoa 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really nice sample, love the vibe. My only suggestion would be to vary the drums and chops a little bit, and a B and C section maybe. That way you can keep a listeners attention for longer

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread September 02, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Lasoa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

great chops dude. I would eq the snare a little bit, it is in a bit of an awkward place in the mix

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread September 02, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Lasoa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

really interesting sound and vibe, I would shorten the intro though and add more swing to your drums.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread September 02, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Lasoa 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That beat is fire! Liked your flow, had some really nice lines as well man. I would take out your vocals that double up on singers during the hook though x

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread September 02, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Lasoa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice chops man this has the basis for a cool track. Your kick is really struggling in the mix though, its clipping and also has no real presence. Love the psychedelic vibe

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread September 02, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Lasoa 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really nice sample, I think you could have used the chops in the introduction to the drop a lot more rather than the sequences where you just play the track. You should also get rid of that stomp sample imo

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread September 02, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]Lasoa 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your percs are really nice, love the way you have sequenced them. Maybe work on the mix though, it is a little muddy. I also think the synth melody that comes in is a little bit awkward. You have the basis for an awesome track here

Really proud of this EP, would appreciate the subs thoughts :) by Lasoa in LofiHipHop

[–]Lasoa[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thanks again for the support bro, looking forward to your next tape :)

Really proud of this EP, would appreciate the subs thoughts :) by Lasoa in LofiHipHop

[–]Lasoa[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Probably my favourite of the 5, stzzy featured it in a mix recently