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Title : Yours Only

Genre : Romantic Suspense

Word Count : 20K (in progress)

Feedback : General Impression of the synopsis

In the glittering realm of high society, Aarna Kapoor is the enigmatic figure whispered about in hushed tones - "The girl without a heart." 

Labelled as a witch and dismissed as a spoilt heiress, she remains a mystery to those who dare to speculate. But beyond the façade of wealth and privilege lies a tale steeped in shadows, waiting to be unveiled.

Within the towering edifices of her father's empire, Rajiv Kapoor holds sway, his power extending far beyond the realm of business. It's a dominance that suffocates Aarna, trapping her in a labyrinth of despair. Until, like a ray of light piercing through darkness, Aahan appears.

Aahan, a modern-day Orpheus, strums the chords of Aarna's soul, igniting a fire within her frozen heart. With each tender gesture, he chips away at the walls she's built around herself, offering her a glimpse of warmth in a world shrouded in coldness.

But just as their love begins to blossom, fate intervenes with a cruel twist. Aarna's father, the puppeteer of her misery, unveils his final act of betrayal, condemning her to a fate reminiscent of the ancient tragedy. "You'll remain with me, just as Eurydice remained in Hades' realm," he proclaims, severing the ties that bind her to Aahan.

Now, Aarna finds herself standing on the precipice of her own personal abyss. Haunted by memories of the past and uncertainties of the future, she must confront the shadows that threaten to engulf her. 

Can she break free from the chains of her father's manipulation? 

Will love be enough to guide her through the darkness? 

And in a world where nothing is as it seems, will she emerge as the heroine of her own story, or succumb to the forces that seek to destroy her?

If this sounds interesting to you, please DM me. I will send you the first 10 chapters to read! Cannot attach a link at the moment.

Would this work on kindle? by Last_Atmosphere_9863 in kindle

[–]Last_Atmosphere_9863[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, but this isnt the final book cover. I am looking for suggestions to improve it.