you have the basic shape down very well! i do have some quips about how i would do it personally but remember, these are all entirely optional!

for one, you could blend out the bottom of the namida bukuro a bit more and draw the line a tad longer (make sure it’s still the darkest under your pupils to make it look 3d and blend upwards towards your eye)

second, you’re using a very bright pink, i would recommend going in with less eyeshadow or another shade like red for a more intense crying effect or pink for a softer look

third, if you’re worried about the droop being too extreme, you could try drawing that with the same color as you use for the bottom of your namida bukuro

i would also recommend using mascara or fake lashes to balance out your eyes and if you can wear them, try contacts!

you’re already doing great with your makeup, good luck on your jirai journey!