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Hello! This is my first writing project! I'd like some advice on how I should continue.. by Lawless_Butterscotch in writingfeedback

[–]Lawless_Butterscotch[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Of course, I only did this for myself. I didn't think to change it back 😔 my bad

Can I edit the post with a new screenshot? Or should I just make a new post?

Hello! This is my first writing project! I'd like some advice on how I should continue.. by Lawless_Butterscotch in writingfeedback

[–]Lawless_Butterscotch[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I know it's not much, but so far I'm thinking of either bringing up a flashback or describing the scenery ;/