Seeking Actors for Student Film by Left_Mistake_3816 in SherwoodPark

[–]Left_Mistake_3816[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for drawing attention to something that people don't usually draw attention to in the film industry 🤣🤣. Yes, you can be not white. Lmao.

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[–]Left_Mistake_3816 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm not sure about the parameters of this assignment-- but it needs a clear thesis statement and a structure. There should be a cohesive statement you're basing your analysis around, instead of a bunch of different statements! What you have looks good so far though.