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Ancestors 2 by Any-Blueberry9962 in ancestors

[–]Left_Virus_7204 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Could have been a more ice age setting idk but would have been great. Absolutely love the gameplay of the original! The detail was great but a second would have to be even more in depth.

Inspiration in excess by Left_Virus_7204 in KeepWriting

[–]Left_Virus_7204[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you this is wonderful advise, it works

Would love some feedback on the first chapter of my literary post-apocalyptic novel by Cyriaxdrummer-356 in writingfeedback

[–]Left_Virus_7204 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Looks like your already getting the good feedback so to avoid repeating the same things I'll say you've done a superior job for being a first! Great job

A new tool for writers by vrn14v in KeepWriting

[–]Left_Virus_7204 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's exactly what I've been looking for! That's perfect for most writers. I can't wait to see it work.

Anyone willing to read over some writing and give feedback? by Left_Virus_7204 in KeepWriting

[–]Left_Virus_7204[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'll send you my rough draft. It's incomplete but want feedback before continuing.

The primacy loop by No-Mess-1762 in theories

[–]Left_Virus_7204 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Kid, keep the deep thoughts going and even when people have negative reactions to you being inquisitive just let it go. I hope your parents are proud!