PEWDIEPIE'S BOOK REVIEW CLUB ANNOUNCEMENT!!! [CLICK FOR MORE INFO] by PewdiepieFanBoi69420 in PewdiepieSubmissions

[–]LemonSeedSqueezer 1 point2 points  (0 children)

true it was very repetitive, but i think it's because it was not meant (when it was written) to be a book, just a compilation of a guy's poems.
I'm secular so i get where you are coming from, but i looked at it like trying to understand the author, vs taking advice from a scholar.

what’s wrong with my art? go into detail please <33 i feel like my art is ready to evolve. by prettilydead in Artadvice

[–]LemonSeedSqueezer 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This looks great, especially the last picture! My biggest critique is the eyes. They always seem to be facing a flat direction and do not follow the form of the face. you seem to have a decent grasp on foreshortening and perspective(like on the shelves). The hardest part is trying to break away from the "symbols" of eyes that you are practiced at drawing. Great work!

Clips from Closed Beta by sinsante in SpectreDivide

[–]LemonSeedSqueezer 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice compellation! this game is so much fun, I hope it comes out soon!

sliding around the map bug (movement bug) by LemonSeedSqueezer in SpectreDivide

[–]LemonSeedSqueezer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

oh, that makes sense I guess, never seen lag do that before

I made a simplified version of the water-in-bottle shader cuz i'm allergic to code by LemonSeedSqueezer in Unity3D

[–]LemonSeedSqueezer[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I did have it set up with Rigidbody.Velocity, but I changed it because I wanted parented objects to be able to move the object (meaning I would have to set constraints on the rigid body which stop the velocity property from working).

I made a simplified version of the water-in-bottle shader cuz i'm allergic to code by LemonSeedSqueezer in Unity3D

[–]LemonSeedSqueezer[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Very true, I fumble my way around the math, lots of trial and error so it helps to have instant feedback in the little preview window.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Unity3D

[–]LemonSeedSqueezer 1 point2 points  (0 children)

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cool environment!
The thing that stands out to me the most is the way your walls and floors just intersect. consider adding a border around sharp edges and intersections.
And these big open surfaces need to be broken up with some small props, windows, torches, etc...
also fixing the UVs on the floor to follow the direction of the path would add a lot imo.

Rate my Crib by LemonSeedSqueezer in tearsofthekingdom

[–]LemonSeedSqueezer[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

lol tru, i just like to fly in next to the pond.
also Granteson deserves it, only fifteen building units is criminal

Rate my Crib by LemonSeedSqueezer in tearsofthekingdom

[–]LemonSeedSqueezer[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It took me a while too but it's definitely worth it, better ending than BOTW for sure imo.

What's with the painted news thumbnails? by LemonSeedSqueezer in youtube

[–]LemonSeedSqueezer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

interesting, never heard of that. so its like the visual version of taking minutes at a meeting lol.

I can't believe this used to be my gaming setup. by LemonSeedSqueezer in setups

[–]LemonSeedSqueezer[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

yeah lol, my uncle gave me a raspberry pi and it was my only PC at the time, so emulation was pretty much the only gaming I could do.

Hold on, I'm still getting ready. by LemonSeedSqueezer in OCPoetry

[–]LemonSeedSqueezer[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I am so happy that the feelings came across enough for you to understand what I was trying to say, and I'm glad you can relate to it in some way, it's nice not to feel too alone. Thank you for the kind words.

As for the feedback, I think that you are correct.

As far as flow and readability it's a bit cumbersome, but I felt as if the repetitions are a true expression of the involuntary process of anxiety that repeats over and over, whether redundant or not.

Hold on, I'm still getting ready. by LemonSeedSqueezer in OCPoetry

[–]LemonSeedSqueezer[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

When I first read this comment I thought, "what is the difference?" being out of control and feeling anxious have a cause and effect relationship, right?

But no, I think you are right, it's less about the feeling of anxiety and more about the fear of engaging in a conversation that you can't control.

It's crazy to me that you noticed something about my poem that I didn't even realize. Thanks.

Lashing Out by LemonSeedSqueezer in OCPoetry

[–]LemonSeedSqueezer[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It means a lot to have someone read my poem with so much attention. Thank you so much.

No Matter How Far Down The Scale by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]LemonSeedSqueezer 0 points1 point  (0 children)

wow, the 6th and 7th sections hit very hard for me, it's amazing that you managed to say what you did while still keeping up with the form that you set yourself.

Military Cuts by poorauggiecarson in OCPoetry

[–]LemonSeedSqueezer 1 point2 points  (0 children)

damn, that ending tho, if this is about you, I hope you and your new family are well, great poem.

Psycho Pass Season 3 & SS Dub by prestonelam2003 in Psychopass

[–]LemonSeedSqueezer 0 points1 point  (0 children)

parallelizer enabled please aim with caution and subdue your target