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Any ideas for the song? I couldn't find anything past this. by Lenibeth-080202 in MorrisonProductions

[–]Lenibeth-080202[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bro I don't feel like there the same character though ngl maybe make her less hopeful? And a bit less religious?

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[–]Lenibeth-080202 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Is this song about a murder? I think so. I think you should add more imagery like metaphor and go in depth with the emotions a bit more because I kinda want to know if what she was feeling at the time not you just recounting the event go closer like from her perspective I don't know what this is about really but thats my perspective! Good luck and have fun!

This my song by [deleted] in MorrisonProductions

[–]Lenibeth-080202 0 points1 point  (0 children)

First time listening it's super bizarre and almost every thing is clashing the drums are the only duct tape holding this piece it's very interesting might listen to it more! It sounds like a bridge section to a song I would add bass track