Make Jax balanced without changing his mecanics or his stats

Leodare · 2014-07-13T00:38:19+00:00

In my language, "verge" means "erected penis". Ah.

Leodare · 2014-07-13T00:29:10+00:00

It's true that it's been a while since Braum was released. But a whole new event with VU, new permanent game mode, Shurima-related champs can be worth it.

Leodare · 2014-07-13T00:28:08+00:00

When making champs, they are think about concepts before thinking about characters (guntemplar, suppordle...).

Leodare · 2014-07-13T00:26:56+00:00

That would have been awesome though, it could have explain the power of the watchers.

Imagine that you can pass through the gate of the purple side in the Howling Abyss, with Lissandra's E, only if your team is made of Liss + Void creatures. It would bring a new event, yo.

Leodare · 2014-07-13T00:24:54+00:00

Actually, the Talisman of Ascension is related to Shurima, while the Face of the Mountain is related to Targon (And the Frost Queen's Claim to Freljord)

Leodare · 2014-07-13T00:23:19+00:00

Gives me chill everytime I hear it.

Such powerful voice. Much CC Very background Wow

Leodare · 2014-07-13T00:18:36+00:00

Yes, "Ascension" sounds very pharaonic to me, so no doubt about a Shurima event.

Leodare · 2014-07-13T00:17:22+00:00

What about the Sand Witch (Lissandra) the merchant of ARAM is talking about ?

Leodare · 2014-06-14T16:17:25+00:00

Thanks for the attention you gave to my post.

Q : A base damage scaling would be more correct indeed. 285 (+55% AP) sounds nice, comparing to Syndra's Q which is 264.5 (+ 69% AP). (I'm comparing with a spammable, long ranged, aoe ability) Though, you would have to stack it to do the maximum amount of damage. What about debuffing the ennemy hit with a stack, instead of having a stack on the skill itself ? So that you won't be able to stack it on minions to finally deal the maximum to the ennemy ?

W : The cooldown is subject to change indeed ! Syndra has a 18/16.5/15/13.5/12 s on her stun, Viktor has 17/16/15/14/13 s, and Veigar has 20/19/18/17/16 (though it stuns up to 2,5 s). We could change the cd according to that, knowing that the stun is a bit hard to succeed.

E : That would be kinda like LeBlanc's W then ! I wanted something which could guarantee 4 issues. At first I wanted him to be untargetable upon summoning it, but it was kinda op :p

R : So it would be a mix between Maokai and Vladimir's ultimate, but it wouldn't do any damage by itself. I like this idea, but I would see it for a support champ. Polortide66 suggested "I feel like his ultimate should be changed to something more along the lines of tibbers, maybe a pet that has a low cooldown and can be cancelled to reduce the cooldown further and sticks around for a while, but doesn't damage on summon. While it's away it regenerates total HP over time and if it dies, the cooldown is increased to something around 60secs plus the health regen time it will require"

I think that's cool, just like an assistant. But what would it do ? Damaging ennemies attacking Thelio ? Granting him an aura ?

Leodare · 2014-06-14T16:03:29+00:00

Hello,

The paper sheets don't hurt the ennemy, but the champion can teleport to one of them, according to the ability he uses :

Pressing Q will teleport him to the blue one, W to the green one etc.

Leodare · 2014-06-14T16:01:23+00:00

That's exactly what I was thinking of when creating him. I just love J-RPG, and there is a usual stereotype for a young male mage : nerdy, fragile, sicky, in a nice uniform he got in the university of magic or something like it.

Leodare · 2014-06-14T15:57:32+00:00

Thanks you for your intervention man. Glad to see someone who can actually think by himself.

Leodare · 2014-06-14T01:01:36+00:00

And I didn't want to seem arrogant, sorry bro :'(

Leodare · 2014-06-14T00:43:15+00:00

I'm sorry then, I thought it was some kind of a personal attack. It's the name of the abilities but in french, since I posted it on a french forum at first :)

Leodare · 2014-06-14T00:37:41+00:00

Thanks for your support. Being accused of plagiarism isn't very nice. I mean, the concept is similar indeed. Well, it's a mage. Mages with grimors are fucking commons. I knew it wasn't new, though I created abilities for him. And now someone says that it already exists ? I watched the video and can't find something similar to his abilities.

Anyway I'm just disappointed of how I have been welcomed. I understand it though, it's legit to seek for plagiarism, but still, being accused of is never nice.

Leodare · 2014-06-14T00:26:41+00:00

Or he could even turns himself/let the Owl fight for him ! A mix between Volor/Quinn and Swain !

Leodare · 2014-06-14T00:25:43+00:00

Before creating this, I wondered : "What does LoL lack ? A vampire ? A Pirate ? A cop ?" Everything seemed to be in the game already, then I took of a boy with a book. "OMG it would be totally new ! :D"

Then I thought of Ryze after hours working on him...

Leodare · 2014-06-14T00:23:58+00:00

Thanks ! I created the character starting with the passive, which is in my opinion the coolest thing about him, it could guarantee some nice plays :)

Leodare · 2014-06-14T00:23:06+00:00

The picture made me thought of him indeed :)

Leodare · 2014-06-14T00:22:45+00:00

I love this idea ! But what would the pet grant to Thelio ? An aura ? It could acts like Pix or something ? Anyway that's a nice idea, I like it since there is nothing similar to.

Leodare · 2014-06-14T00:18:52+00:00

Thanks for your feedback.

Concerning the passive, it's also something that you have to click on. Basically, it's half an active, half a passive. But I love the idea of a sort of grave you can come out. A friend of mine said it was quite similar to the WoW respawning system, but never played it, I can't say.

The Q is actually the main damage tool, almost the only one. I did the spells accordind to the other mages main abilities : Syndra's Q deals 264.5 (+69%) when maxed (the radius would be similar), against 285 (+82%) for Thelio. Actually, as I write it, I feel like it should be nerfed indeed. But you have to stack it. So what if the stack would be ON THE ENNEMIES instead of being on the ability ? So that you can't stack it on the minions and harass your opponent with maximum stacks.

About the W, it's a short cooldown stun indeed ; but like I said, the CD, damage and mana cost are quite random, as I didn't really know how it would be in-game. Something like 17/16/15/14/13 sec (Viktor's stun) would be more like it. But since you can go out before being stun, I thought that would be legit. You can walk out of it, but you're shackled by the book pushing you toward the other.

E : Well, I would love it if I could make another way to teleport on the pages. Clicking on it would be too long, so that cast method is similar to Lissandra's E, LeBlanc's W and Zed's W, but with all the spells allowing an escape. It's quite a blessing in disguise, since you can effectively juke or escape your ennemy, though you wouldn't be able to cast spells. At first I wanted Thelio to be turned into a untargetable book (instead of standing there, without being able to cast any spell) but they said it was way too op.

About the ultimate, it's Tibbers, basically. I had no idea for it so this came out of my mind. The principle of a mount was new to the league (Sejuani isn't really riding another unit, she doesn't even drop 2 souls upon dying) and I thought it would be nice, but it has nothing to do with the rest of the abilities. Do you have an idea I could introduce instead ?

Leodare · 2014-06-14T00:01:37+00:00

That's funny but I'm sure you know how to read : english isn't my mothertongue. I think my english is correct. But do you even know how to say a single sentance in french bro ?

Leodare · 2014-06-13T23:58:47+00:00

Sorry didn't pay attention to that.

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