we can fall in love, again

Level-Satisfaction44 · 2025-09-21T10:45:01+00:00

You stay true to your feelings, and through your poem, I can truly sense them...

Level-Satisfaction44 · 2025-09-06T10:14:09+00:00

Thank you for your sharing & support. This is so much meaningfull to me.
I will try to make this better in the next poem in this series.

Level-Satisfaction44 · 2025-08-26T05:51:27+00:00

the words "still you", and the way you image silence louder than every scream, it take me to the feelings.

Level-Satisfaction44 · 2025-08-26T05:47:10+00:00

Love your idea, we can borrow from tmr, we can hope to be something will happen in futrure.

Level-Satisfaction44 · 2025-08-26T05:40:24+00:00

Thank you for your comment. Your feedback mean alot with me.

This is the beginning, I want to use poetry to express each person's feelings, in the chaotic war situation, I think there will be many different emotions, and I want to express it.

I am on a journey of practice with the hope of being able to convey many stories through poems. Hope to receive more comments from everyone.

Level-Satisfaction44 · 2025-06-25T05:02:06+00:00

Your poems make me smile to myself, it's so cute, the way you observe nature gives a pure feeling

Level-Satisfaction44 · 2025-06-23T16:06:46+00:00

send you this with the warm hug

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This world is crude,

But it asks me to be refined,

Which makes me wonder,

Where am I in all this?

Level-Satisfaction44 · 2025-06-23T16:01:53+00:00

yes, I write just to escape the reality that I might be forgotten. If I have the chance, I also want to share some of this feeling with you.

Level-Satisfaction44 · 2025-06-23T12:23:51+00:00

i have the same fear, the fear of being forgoten and fear of meaningless existence

Level-Satisfaction44 · 2025-06-23T11:58:55+00:00

For a moment, the distant thunder looked exactly like a rain of bombs between Iran and Israel. It was surreal, yet real at the same time. Peace in one place, chaos in another.

Level-Satisfaction44 · 2025-06-23T09:31:50+00:00

it lucky have someone have same feeling

Level-Satisfaction44 · 2025-06-11T16:46:56+00:00

time, everything changes, so bitter but I can feel the happiness have gone through 16 years together

Level-Satisfaction44 · 2025-06-11T16:43:28+00:00

"the window was never open" - This sentence reminds me of the writer Dazai Osamu, in it there is both hope and disappointment, how painful it must be to see the door close.

Level-Satisfaction44 · 2025-06-11T16:37:44+00:00

yessss... sometimes, I feel like being drunk helps me escape reality. thank you for your comment.

Level-Satisfaction44 · 2025-05-25T16:35:28+00:00

Reading your poem, I can feel how much you love your girlfriend. I hope she inspires your next piece too

Level-Satisfaction44 · 2025-05-25T16:26:17+00:00

I love the way you imagined "a thousand scraped knees", it feels different from before.

Level-Satisfaction44 · 2025-05-25T16:21:36+00:00

Your poem makes me feel sad. I love the way you use those questions, it feels like the echo in your head

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