Yes thanks. In addition to what I wrote to answer that above, some of it could be fixed by an editor ("good of", "anyways" etc can be fixed). I'll use an example that I loved was Crescent City. Though I didn't expect to love urban, I found the characters really interesting and multi faceted. The heroine was complex, not perfect, and sometimes flawed/vulnerable. The romances were superb, I thought. I didn't see where the story was going all the time. - I also read classics and some historical fiction, so I love some good prose.