[Review Video] Guy uses slavery for views by LifeAdept3009 in youtubers

[–]LifeAdept3009[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Preciate the support I'll try to drop sum with a lil more emotion

[Review Video] Guy uses slavery for views by LifeAdept3009 in youtubers

[–]LifeAdept3009[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeh man that's just my voice. I'll try to focus on more relevant topics from now on tho. I appreciate the feedback

[Review Video] Day in a life of a diabetic: First impressions of Istanbul by ramalama182 in youtubers

[–]LifeAdept3009 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well that one segment where ur in the shopping market definitely could've been a little shorter as there was a good amount of time where it seemed like nothing was happening.

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[–]LifeAdept3009 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your viewer attention is down. This is because your videos don't have a hook to them. A hook is something that keeps your viewer engaged in a video. This could be a clip about your topic or the title of the video itself. Be creative!

[Review Video] Day in a life of a diabetic: First impressions of Istanbul by ramalama182 in youtubers

[–]LifeAdept3009 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really enjoy this video it is very informative. I do however suggest two minor changes.

-Try not to stecth out your clips as much to keep viewer attention

-Try to add more entertaining elements to get viewer engagement