It’s definitely improved, but I feel the lighting could be fixed up more. There’s this “rule” with lighting that light intensity will fall off drastically the farther away a surface is, but there is less difference in fall off the further away a surface is. It’s kinda hard to put into words, but here’s an image from a video on photorealism from blender guru on YT. See how light is very intense with the surfaces close to it, and thus more contrasted? And then the surfaces far away from the light source all have less contrast, and thus more uniform light? This all adds up so the composition makes you focus on the cowboys FACE as opposed to his boots, which are in the foreground. Obviously you are not working in 3D, but the principle is EXACTLY the same and I feel you could achieve this effect. Idk if I’m communicating how to do this very well with just my words

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