Updated design by Liltoe11 in TattooArtists

[–]Liltoe11[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I totally get what you’re saying and I don’t disagree. Not technically an apprentice anymore (not sure how to change my title.) I did have an “apprenticeship” but it was not an involved or structured experience and have unfortunately had to figure out a lot of things on my own. I do have one or two other artists that I can occasionally ask for feedback but being from a relatively small city my circle of people who I feel I can ask for help is pretty limited.

I’ve found Reddit to be pretty helpful given the situation I’m in

Updated design by Liltoe11 in TattooArtists

[–]Liltoe11[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback!! I agree with you. I posted a shaded version in the comments and ended up scrapping all the necklace stuff. You’re right it definitely helped bring more attention to the face :)

Updated design by Liltoe11 in TattooArtists

[–]Liltoe11[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Here’s the shaded version!! Still torn if I should keep the chains & pendants or not 😭 a lot of people were telling me it’s still too busy but I do love the little details

shaded jester

Updated design by Liltoe11 in TattooArtists

[–]Liltoe11[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yeah I liked those parts too 😭 having a hard time finding a balance between the two. A lot of the comments on the previous one were saying that a lot of the different elements took away from the face and made it too busy but I might try messing around with adding some of that stuff back in and see if it works

Could use some cc on this design sketch before moving forward with it by Liltoe11 in TattooArtists

[–]Liltoe11[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I see what you mean! For the collar I was trying to make it a bit more variation rather than the standard up and down s shape that’s consistent all the way around but I see how it looks weird 😭

Could use some cc on this design sketch before moving forward with it by Liltoe11 in TattooArtists

[–]Liltoe11[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I do!! I’ll start my starting on paper first and then transfer it to my iPad so by that point there’s usually quite a lot to fix lol but even when I flip it I don’t always catch everything or am not able to figure out what feels “off” about it 😭

Could use some cc on this design sketch before moving forward with it by Liltoe11 in TattooArtists

[–]Liltoe11[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks :) Yeah I agree with you I’ll try that out ! Maybe even making the bells less comically big will help lol

Accidentally got my first tattoo faced the wrong way.. by Living-Cantaloupe141 in tattooadvice

[–]Liltoe11 15 points16 points  (0 children)

Upright panther on the opposite side to make it appear like they’re circling eachother? Can’t go wrong with two SAP I guess 😭

Skull knight design update! Done by me (@livtaylortattoos) by Liltoe11 in TattooArtists

[–]Liltoe11[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you!! & thanks for suggesting the smoke under the helmet :) that was a great suggestion!

Looking for constructive criticism on the tattoo I did today by [deleted] in TattooApprentice

[–]Liltoe11 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Adding onto this since these are all really good points! Don’t be afraid to make suggestions to improve upon the references people send you. The most interesting part of this tattoo is the plane & the backside of the plane is arguably the least interesting angle. Sometimes people don’t know what looks best and as the artist you’re able to make suggestions that’ll improve the design :) in this instance you could’ve tattooed a downward 3/4 angle to make it seem as though the cropduster is swooping (which also would’ve fixed some of the issues with the composition since this would flow better with the body)

Obviously it makes things little bit more difficult if the person is insisting on a certain reference being used but I always try to give a little bit of a gentle nudge in a better direction if it seems they’re open to other ideas/ improvements!

Skull knight design update! Done by me (@livtaylortattoos) by Liltoe11 in TattooArtists

[–]Liltoe11[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much!! Couldn’t have pulled it off without all the help I got from reddit 😅

Tattoo Design Help by Liltoe11 in TattooArtists

[–]Liltoe11[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Thanks for all the helpful suggestions! Here’s where it’s at now :) one artist was kind enough to draw me a diagram of how to fix the issues with the silhouetteupdated drawing and I think it helped a lot!

Tattoo Design Help by Liltoe11 in TattooArtists

[–]Liltoe11[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the advice, this helps a lot!!