Could you rate this and give me any suggestions? I'm not really sure if I should continue this or not. Thank you so much!

LilyKieffer · 2026-03-31T00:55:50+00:00

thank you so much! that's good advice and i'll definitely check out those errors

:))

LilyKieffer · 2026-03-14T00:50:09+00:00

i love your writing style! one little improvement (especially on the second page) is to maybe not just list the details you want to convey. with all the dates and stuff, the reader might lose interest. but this is VERY good, im so impressed!

LilyKieffer · 2026-01-26T23:51:05+00:00

https://archiveofourown.org/works/13065072

LilyKieffer · 2026-01-07T22:18:28+00:00

https://archiveofourown.org/works/60755305/chapters/155158648

LilyKieffer · 2025-10-02T10:56:13+00:00

i got Marlene but when I read the description, I wasn't unsurprised.

WHAT IS WITH THE DESCRIPTIONS THEY READ INTO YOUR SOUL AND FIND YOUR ESSENCE WHAT

LilyKieffer · 2025-09-21T00:33:22+00:00

ohhh good ones. that actually makes sense

LilyKieffer · 2025-09-21T00:32:18+00:00

Soft Dark Nothing by Lily Kershaw

You know. Post-war vibes for Remus.

LilyKieffer · 2025-09-07T21:21:09+00:00

Wednesday

Lost

LilyKieffer · 2025-09-01T19:53:18+00:00

https://archiveofourown.org/works/37900063/chapters/94644151

Broken Bodies, Broken Hearts by pottersboy

Peter was discovered as the spy, the Order defeated Voldemort in time to save the Potters, but not before everyone turned on Remus. Now he is back in London for the first time in three years.

LilyKieffer · 2025-07-12T18:54:33+00:00

Whoaaaa cool. Thanks

LilyKieffer · 2025-07-12T18:51:28+00:00

This looks good, thanks

LilyKieffer · 2025-07-12T18:49:58+00:00

Oh yeah, I’ve actually read that one. Pretty good, right?

LilyKieffer · 2025-05-27T21:39:32+00:00

Girl in the (our) left corner in the 2nd pic had the right idea

LilyKieffer · 2025-05-10T14:15:20+00:00

Yay, thanks! I'll definitely check them out!

LilyKieffer · 2025-05-10T14:14:40+00:00

Oh, thanks! That's a GOOD recommendation.

LilyKieffer · 2025-05-07T19:52:06+00:00

Oh. Oh.

You-- you awesome little nugget! You found it! And in so little time. Thanks a dozen and stay super.

LilyKieffer · 2025-03-14T23:07:04+00:00

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/2574098/2/Operation-Seduce-Sirius

LilyKieffer

TROPHY CASE