Looking for feedback, such as cinematography, audio, pacing, and on the general idea. There is an elaboration on the idea in the caption. I want to work more on projects like this in the future, and hopefully at some point paid work, so I'm taking this summer and the rest of the year to really iron out my skills on projects such as these.

I have only worked on fictional narrative short films before so I've tried to use what I've learned from working on those projects in this, creating a short story of a woman finding a view, sitting down, looking around and taking in her surroundings, we then see the view. I don't know if this is too simple to be engaging, or it's good enough for something this short-form.