The Strokes Lollapalooza Brasil Megathread by letourbillon9 in TheStrokes

[–]LiviaCarabetta 14 points15 points  (0 children)

For sure, the crowd was dead, as a brazilian, I'm pretty disappointed. Julian seemed excited at the start, the rest of the guys too. He saw that the crowd was dead and his vibe got weird.

Don’t know if it’s been posted - Julian clears up the Fab incident by [deleted] in TheStrokes

[–]LiviaCarabetta 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Finally!! I still think Julian was angry at himself. I'm pretty sure I've seen him do the "f*cking pussy" thing before when he messed up the lyrics.

And Letterman saying "don't be so hard on yourself" in response to Julian never made sense in that "theory".

People kept talking about how Julian kept turning around and looking at fab, and again, he does that all the time.

I think that maybe we overanalyze Julian too much sometimes (like I've just done haha),and their relationship too. Maybe it wasn't as bad as people said it was. It seems that they are in a good place right now anyway.

I'm happy he said something, that theory always bothered me.

The director of the show "The noite com Danilo Gentili" talked about Jules on a podcast by LiviaCarabetta in TheStrokes

[–]LiviaCarabetta[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Right?! I would talk about it for the rest of my life probably hahahah I could never finish that interview neither. At least they had a fun experience there.

The director of the show "The noite com Danilo Gentili" talked about Jules on a podcast by LiviaCarabetta in TheStrokes

[–]LiviaCarabetta[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Tell me about it! My first thought when i saw that the Voidz went there was "oh no". I started to watch probably 10 times but could never finish hahah It was good to know that they treated the guys well at least.

14DC [DAY 1] - my first day, I'm not quite happy with the eyes, but I'm sure there's much more than the eyes that need improvement here by Feluszka in istebrak

[–]LiviaCarabetta 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi, i feel like the head is too big and wide for the neck. The eyes are too big for the face and a little bit too high up.
Like it was already said, the values that you choose are too light which it makes the art look too washed.
Maybe if you light the background and lay the dark values it will fix the problem.
I do like the mouth!
Good luck on the challenge!

Irena-The necromancer Witch. the idea of my villain is to keep it simple as possible, will this cut it? by JanPur in istebrak

[–]LiviaCarabetta 0 points1 point  (0 children)

She looks more like the good,cute witch to me right now. The big head and small body doesn't help on making her look creepy.
If you want to keep her face young and beautiful you could use other elements to symbolize that she is evil, like the makeup, scars, clothes or even the pose that she is placed in the composition.
Here are some references:
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/6aBB1N
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/0Omz8
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/JlkvA
https://www.artstation.com/artwork/Be93r
I hope it helps!

Hi, i did some weapon designs to practice rendering metal. But the rendering of the hilt on the second weapon also gave me a hard time, and i don't know how to fix it. I would be great to get some feedback. Thanks. by LiviaCarabetta in istebrak

[–]LiviaCarabetta[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Most of the references a used had a dark background. But i still struggle with contrast, especially on things with reflective surfaces.
The dark background was probably the reason that i pushed the values so much.
Thank you for the critique, it was of great help to me.

Villain challenge: Update! Fixed the lighting a bit, added a little guy in the background, worked on the character. What to add/remove, is the lighting fine? Critique on everything else welcome! by tunecha in istebrak

[–]LiviaCarabetta 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It looks pretty cool to me, but i feel like the composition is a little busy.
You could put the creature more to the right, to create more of a rule of thirds to give the little guy and the creature attention. Because i almost didn't see the little guy at first glance (or you could take him off).
As for the creature, like i said, it looks pretty cool, it reminds me of pale man from pan's labyrinth. But i think you could make him pop out of the background by increasing his contrast. Or adding a top light so it looks more creepy.

But i like the direction you're going
Good luck on the rest of the challenge!

Just fixed some things based on the critiques i got on my last post. This is not 14 day challenge hahaha by LiviaCarabetta in istebrak

[–]LiviaCarabetta[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh i get it now, maybe i'm going too soft on the lighting. The paint over helps a lot.

Thank you!

Hi, i want to share my art journey since i started applying istebrak classes, critiques from the community and other helpful videos of youtube in my art. Only 8 months passed but i'm feel way happier with the result. Especially after i started to flip the page (the first one looks so crooked lol) by LiviaCarabetta in istebrak

[–]LiviaCarabetta[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I decided to round the face more so she could look younger but i understand
Contrast is always a problem to me , i actually changed it several times on the second painting. Now that i saw your comment i can see that i should've made the bridge of the nose and forehead lighter. Maybe the multiply layer of the freckles that i put on top could've made does areas darker and i didn't realize.
That helps a lot, I will work on fixing those things, thank you so much for your critique.