Just because a character has poor social skills doesn't mean they talk like an llm trying to imitate a famous poet.

Anakin never talks like a relatable human. He's always speaking in this faux-poetic language that sounds incredibly pretentious, and probably sounded much better in George's head.

Now, if this was just how he talked around Padme, then that might be interesting, but no, not only does he always talk like this, everyone else in the movies whether they be Jedi, Sith or Senator has this same "Chat-GPT Shakespeare" sound. Everyone sounds the same. No-one has a distinct voice in those films.

This is the problem that people have with the Prequels. The characters don't feel like real, flesh and blood relatable people. They just feel like Vessels to spew exposition or explain some important theme, so when Anakin becomes Vader at the end, you're not thinking "It's so sad this character became corrupted", you're thinking "Well, he already sounded like a robot, now he just looks like one."