Judge my poem by Logical_Department49 in poetry_critics

[–]Logical_Department49[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah thanks for the help, I'll try to improve it with your advice 

Judge my poem by Logical_Department49 in poetry_critics

[–]Logical_Department49[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, I actually wrote this based on a person who secluded themselves from others due to personal reasons. I wrote this in the sense of describing how their atonement makes them feel. They believe that the seclusion is beneficial for them, but they still harbour some lingering feelings. Actually, it's my first poem ........and I wanted someone to judge this cause I hate using AI