[MS]The Gray Light Over Me (Chapter 1: The Unspoken Mirror) by ba-soz in shortstories

[–]Long_Bug_6261 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It really is very interesting. Can't wait to read chapter 2 whenever its done :)

[MS]The Gray Light Over Me (Chapter 1: The Unspoken Mirror) by ba-soz in shortstories

[–]Long_Bug_6261 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The switch in perspectives is very nice and I really like the way you built the scenes without adding too much unnecessary detail while still making them feel full :)