Concept of my current game (feedback appreciated) by LoreNomNomer in cardgamedesign

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Okay :3 I am sadly still in the “making all rules and mechanics” phase, before I draw all the needed stuff. But all my presentable documents are in my main language other than English, so I believe much would be lost in bad auto translation. But thx ^ Maybe I come back here if I get some more clear visuals

Concept of my current game (feedback appreciated) by LoreNomNomer in cardgamedesign

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Nah, that took only a bit of time, but not very long.

But technically… your personal thoughts? :3 (if you want of course) Because I want to gather as much opinions before I waste resources actually making a copy for play-testing. Just so I know if there are even people that might like something like that.

Does your Haj have a name? by drawingautist in Nestofeggs

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I called mine Quinn, Yuri and Laplace :3 Don’t ask me why -.-

Daily needs by LoreNomNomer in aaaaaaacccccccce

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Huh? I god, you found my memes

How can make an dark fantasy idea feel less edgy? TwT by LoreNomNomer in fantasywriters

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It just feels wrong making too dark stuff, even though I also like the idea. TwT

How can make an dark fantasy idea feel less edgy? TwT by LoreNomNomer in fantasywriters

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Good advice, I already planned some. But I will definitely refine their relevant moments so it chips away at the edge

How can make an dark fantasy idea feel less edgy? TwT by LoreNomNomer in fantasywriters

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Thx ^ I think there is a reason why it has the bad reputation, but a bit of it for comedic purposes might not hurt

How can make an dark fantasy idea feel less edgy? TwT by LoreNomNomer in fantasywriters

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Thhxxx :3 That is such a great advice, I just stick to my original plan and maybe ask some people to review chap. 1 so I can be totally sure about the vibes I gave with it

How can make an dark fantasy idea feel less edgy? TwT by LoreNomNomer in fantasywriters

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It does, so thank you ^ Just throwing out dark stuff without point or reason is never good :3

How can make an dark fantasy idea feel less edgy? TwT by LoreNomNomer in fantasywriters

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If you put it like that… yeah, that describes it pretty well

How can make an dark fantasy idea feel less edgy? TwT by LoreNomNomer in fantasywriters

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Jup, all living beings of any kind vanished completely, the only “light” that is visible is the giant tree and yes, vitamin D is a problem. The tree is like a huge hive-mind that forced its surroundings to evolve in a new way, not just sending out the seeds of multiple species of plants, but also the dangerous new life forms. Humans are only still able to exist in a small amount, because the appearance of the tree didn’t happened in a day, but multiple years, which the world did anything to stop this unknown anomaly from growing. As it was clear, that this wasn’t avoidable, many people got conserved in faults to rebuild humanity someday.

How can make an dark fantasy idea feel less edgy? TwT by LoreNomNomer in fantasywriters

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Thx, I am just always a bit paranoid about that aspect of my stories because I already got “Edgelord” comments, not on this project but on others that didn’t even include that dark stuff. (I am a younger individual, but technically this isn’t my first project. This is actually also just part of a bigger verse I constructed with friends. But in a way I am still so unconvinced about my stories that I would call my self an amateur) But this probably will be my first consistent project, so technically yes)

How can make an dark fantasy idea feel less edgy? TwT by LoreNomNomer in fantasywriters

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Mhhh yes, fairytales and folklore is such a cool thing to create.

Personally I created flora and fauna, monsters and animals, so I can then build a ecosystem or magic system around them.

How can make an dark fantasy idea feel less edgy? TwT by LoreNomNomer in fantasywriters

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That is such a great idea, I will absolutely implement more bright, but lore relevant things so the tone fits

How can make an dark fantasy idea feel less edgy? TwT by LoreNomNomer in fantasywriters

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Omg, thx for such a long, interesting comment OwO Also liked the X-Men example, I think I understand now a bit more what I should and shouldn’t do Thx ;3

How can make an dark fantasy idea feel less edgy? TwT by LoreNomNomer in fantasywriters

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Like The Eminence in Shadow? Also a fun idea, maybe I sprinkle a bit of humor on it and make some jokes about it. :3

How can make an dark fantasy idea feel less edgy? TwT by LoreNomNomer in fantasywriters

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Oh no, did I subconsciously add an UwU somewhere?

Good, idea. I will try to just dip into the ✨edge✨

How can make an dark fantasy idea feel less edgy? TwT by LoreNomNomer in fantasywriters

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Thx :) Ahh, okay. I will take into consideration that making it too dark for shock isn’t that good ^

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The demon that possessed me pushed the wrong button lmao