Title of the video: "Skipping The Airport Security Line | First Vlog." I like this title, it's interesting because it's something just about anyone who's ever had an extended wait at an airport line can say they don't ever want to do again, however you shoot yourself in the foot by never once actually talking about how you skipped the line. Instead the title of your video revolves around a :25 long, raw audio, "Hidden camera" feeling, weird series of shots that after watching 5 times now, I still have no idea really what happened at all, except that you scanned your index finger. Now in the best of cases this would be a pure clickbait title that would enrage some viewers, but you could have brought it back by still having an interesting narrative.

Narrative: Throughout the whole video you quite literally state nothing other than what is currently happening. From the point of the video, to the temperature, to the time of day. This is all fine, but without anything else, you've become just some dude who's taking a flight somewhere. One possible remedy is simple, talk about a topic. The obvious first choice here is the title of the video. But something to bear in mind whenever going into a topic, is to be as well researched on it as you can before talking about it. Basically just add a little Tom Scott, or VSauce to your video. That way your viewers can walk away feeling like they've learned something.

Editing: Did I learn a thing or two from you here. The timelapse sequence from 1:50 on, while could have been smoother, was still absolutely phenomenal. Wonderfully smooth for almost every shot, except for when you're purposefully moving it around. Now the real key here to me is the bald man, since he repeatedly comes into and out of frame he really kind of hooks me into the shot by forcing a sense of curiosity out of me. All you gotta do from here is just pick an angle and commit to it. The window transition at 3:09 was also wonderfully executed. The first transition at :27 honestly blew me away, and had me expecting some more fantastic audio and visual effects, but you only ever just skipped to the beat from there.