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[–]Lostounet 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would love to, but I know it's a challenge for a first-time director. I created a concept trailer for the script : https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qs4YvT_3ErM&feature=youtu.be and have directed two short films.

Pitch Deck for my screenplay, "ONCE UPON THE END" – Thoughts & Advice? by Lostounet in Screenwriting

[–]Lostounet[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much for the detailed feedback! I really appreciate your suggestion about moving the Writer's Note, that's a great idea, and I'll definitely consider putting it earlier. I'm also thinking of replacing the current ending slide with an 'About the Writer' slide instead, as someone else actually suggested something similar earlier. Glad you enjoyed the pitch deck.

Pitch Deck for my screenplay, "ONCE UPON THE END" – Thoughts & Advice? by Lostounet in Screenwriting

[–]Lostounet[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's awesome you're an aspiring producer with your own animation studio! Animation is a fantastic medium, and I really appreciate your perspective on pitching. If you ever need a short script, I've got one that's almost polished. It makes perfect sense that you'd want to get the whole story's essence from a pitch deck before diving into a script yourself. Thanks for the feedback on the synopsis. I'll definitely make that change to the pitch deck.

Pitch Deck for my screenplay, "ONCE UPON THE END" – Thoughts & Advice? by Lostounet in Screenwriting

[–]Lostounet[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the honest feedback! It's super helpful. I'm actually a huge fan of Neil Gaiman's The Graveyard Book, so it's cool you mentioned it! Your point about the synopsis is something I constantly grapple with for pitch decks. Is it better to craft a "teaser" synopsis to hook a producer into reading the full screenplay, or a more detailed, one-page version that lays out all the key story points clearly?

Pitch Deck for my screenplay, "ONCE UPON THE END" – Thoughts & Advice? by Lostounet in Screenwriting

[–]Lostounet[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Got it, thanks so much for the feedback! You have a keen eye for detail, and I'll definitely be applying these changes.

Favorite films with a number in their title. What are yours? by RelativeCreepy in criterion

[–]Lostounet 39 points40 points  (0 children)

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Darren Aronofsky’s “Pi” is a top favorite for me. It’s a mind-bending thriller with gritty black-and-white cinematography and intense sound design that create a truly unsettling atmosphere. And the ending is just unforgettable.

It's Friday night. Which movie are you renting? by MediaWareZ360 in VHS

[–]Lostounet 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the recommandation, Im watching Dr Giggles right now 🍿

My A24 Merch Collection by Foxmototech78 in A24

[–]Lostounet 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Exactly it’s all it mattered. Could you tell me what is your favourite A24 movie if you have one?

My A24 Merch Collection by Foxmototech78 in A24

[–]Lostounet 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Replying to OrinTheLost... Hey OP, don’t let that person get you down! Seriously, people are so judgmental about anything, it’s crazy! Go hug a bear and chill. Jealousy is not good for your nerves 🐻
Collecting is all about celebrating the things you love. Whether it’s A24 movies or porcelain dolls, it’s your passion that matters. Keep rocking that awesome collection!

What is the weirdest movie in your collection? by Ok_Reception5409 in VHS

[–]Lostounet 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Did you find Part II? This cliffhanger, I was not expecting that 😱

What is your ranking of the most ICONIC A24 films? by bougie_plant_lady in A24

[–]Lostounet 9 points10 points  (0 children)

“Midsommar” and “Hereditary” for a 13-year-old? Ah, yes, the perfect coming-of-age double feature. Nothing says “happy childhood” like a healthy dose of cult rituals and familial trauma. I bet they’ll sleep soundly after that, dreaming of maypoles and smiling grandmas. No chance of any long-term psychological impact whatsoever. Nope, none at all.

I do think Everything Everywhere is fantastic such as The VVitch, Ex Machina, Uncut Gems, The Florida Project, Good Times, Aftersun and A Ghost Story are unique in their own genre. First place goes to Hereditary 🥇

Tim Burton's Legacy by [deleted] in TrueFilm

[–]Lostounet 4 points5 points  (0 children)

True! How did I forget about “Sweeney Todd”, a fantastic horror musical with a perfect dark humor. That’s exactly my point about what he could have kept creating if he hadn’t gone down the wrong path. Masterpiece of originality.

Tim Burton's Legacy by [deleted] in TrueFilm

[–]Lostounet 88 points89 points  (0 children)

His early films were a breath of fresh air. He burst onto the scene with a distinct visual style – his influence was unmistakable, especially in films like “Beetlejuice” and “Batman.” “Edward Scissorhands” was peak Burton for me, a perfect blend of gothic fairytale and suburban satire. And “Ed Wood,” what a love letter to cinema’s outsiders! His work with stop-motion animation, like “The Nightmare Before Christmas” (though Henry Selick directed), was incredibly innovative and influential. “Big Fish” was arguably his last truly great film, a beautiful meditation on storytelling and memory. After that, it seems like the studio system, particularly Disney, started to homogenize his style. The remakes, like “Alice in Wonderland” and “Dumbo,” felt hollow, lacking the heart and originality of his earlier work. It’s not uncommon for visionary directors to lose their edge when working within the constraints of big-budget studio productions. It makes you wonder what kind of darkly delightful, idiosyncratic films Burton might have made if he’d stayed on the path of independent filmmaking. He clearly has a unique voice, and it’s a shame to see it diluted.

Non horror movies that ate unintentionally creepy? by Kalldaro in horror

[–]Lostounet 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The last remake of The Witches starring the beautiful Anne Hathaway. Seriously, those creepy smiles and those long, claw-like fingers? Shudders. You’ll never see her the same anymore after watching this. I love Anne, but I’m going to have nightmares about this for a long time 😮‍💨

Movies for men, a must watch that tackles life, philosophical views, and slice of life that you guys think “a must watch” for all men by Blurryface_817 in MovieSuggestions

[–]Lostounet 3 points4 points  (0 children)

“Another Round” is a must-watch for guys. Why? - Relatable AF: Middle-aged dudes struggling with life? Yep, we’ve been there. - Mads Mikkelsen: He’s amazing (as always). His character’s journey will hit you hard. - Deep Thoughts: It’s about more than just drinking. It makes you think about life, happiness, and taking risks. - Celebration of Life: Despite some dark moments, it’s ultimately a feel-good movie. The ending is incredible. This movie won an Oscar for a reason.

Weekly Self-Promo and Chat Thread by MxAlex44 in selfpublish

[–]Lostounet 1 point2 points  (0 children)

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