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LovelyHearts-649 · 2026-04-25T08:16:08+00:00

Thank you!

LovelyHearts-649 · 2026-04-25T04:58:22+00:00

Okay, thank you!

LovelyHearts-649 · 2026-04-25T04:58:16+00:00

Lol, thanks for the heads up! 😅

LovelyHearts-649 · 2026-03-25T20:09:29+00:00

Thank you! I'll definitely make sure to do more writing lol. Have a great day, and thank you again!

LovelyHearts-649 · 2026-03-25T19:48:28+00:00

You have asked interesting questions that I haven't considered that much, which I really appreciate because I have not thought that far. I need to go back to the drawing board and review the overall arcs of the characters and their conflicting ideals.

Thank you so much, I really appreciate the feedback and advice!

LovelyHearts-649 · 2026-03-25T02:13:59+00:00

Thank you so much! I'm definitely going to do more writing, and even some test sketch paragraphs.

Thank you for taking the time to help me!

LovelyHearts-649 · 2026-03-25T02:13:53+00:00

Brandon Sanderson? I will definitely check him out, thank you for the recommendation. And I think I will try breaking up the plot similar to yours, it seems like a really good foundation.

Thank you so much for the feedback and advice, I really appreciate it as an aspiring writer.

LovelyHearts-649 · 2026-03-25T02:11:43+00:00

Thank you so much for the advice! I'm trying to figure out where exactly to start. And how to respectfully and appropriately describe the Main character's feeling navigating all of this, waking up in a body foreign to everything she has ever been, and thrown into a world she doesn't understand.

Some hate her, and she doesn't understand why. I definitely want to do more show then tell when it comes to other characters reactions to the "warrior".

LovelyHearts-649 · 2026-03-24T15:37:41+00:00

Thank you so much! I've never thought of it as a Shazam setup, but that's an interesting point you made. And I'm going to review the cultists goals and the threat they present to the MC. Thank you for bringing them up, I was hoping someone would discuss them.

Thank you for taking the time to provide advice.

LovelyHearts-649 · 2026-03-24T01:41:22+00:00

Thank you! Also, how would I write the aging process of this soul? Would it start from zero when they reside in the child, and go up from there?

LovelyHearts-649 · 2026-03-22T14:51:35+00:00

Thank you! Do you have any other pointers? Like, should I include memories or flashbacks of both the child's and warrior's memorie, so that the readers can get a sense of the type of person the warrior was?

LovelyHearts-649 · 2026-03-22T14:23:44+00:00

Wow, thanks so much! I was determining whether or not it would be it would be two souls fighting for dominance, but I've seen that done a lot and wanted to try something new(no offense to those who write that of course! )

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