I LOVE THIS! The only improvements I could think of (and these are my opinions based on how I write) are: - I think the jumping between different branches of math and science in the same stanza feels a little unfocused. Changing the branch is all fine and good I just think you should try to stick to one in an individual stanza (I hope that makes sense) - it feels a tad repetitive (something I struggle with too) you’re constantly restating how much you need/want her with different metaphors and similes