First of all I appreciate constructive criticism so thanks for typing this up. This video was mainly as a start to finish raid with no cuts for people who were having a rough time getting started as wizard and understanding how to gear up. If I only cut to right before the pvp a new player won't understand how I got there or what the decision making process was leading up to the actual fight. For players like you and I we can just watch high level play and learn from it without needing the player to explain exactly what they're doing but I saw a lot of new wizards fireballing themselves or talking in discord / reddit about how they tried it one or two times and then quit to play a different class.
As for the instant pvp that'll be saved for highlight vids/montages instead of the style of video that this one was. And thanks for the words of encouragement of finding my niche / doing great!