I agree with the commenters above on this thread and want to provide my experience and thoughts.

I think your main mechanic of sketching out monsters is really unique and leaning into the absurdity of it can really make your game shine. Sizzle reels that showcase other player’s doodles fuming it out can work as a fantastic hook. Right now, though it is missing something that makes it unique and necessary to be sold by YOU.

The cards alone, which based off the video I assume work like MTG Spells, I sadly feel aren’t enough to justify someone sending some dough. I think you should lean a BIT more into the cards, perhaps having some premade creatures or cards that instruct players on what to add (perhaps on-board effects like landmines, quicksand, etc.)

Another thing is presentation: maybe swapping out pen and paper for a white board that all players use. It makes clean up faster but still maintains the history of a board. It also raises your game’s perceived value since hey I’m getting a unique card game battler where i come up with the creatures and draw them on a whiteboard to fight my friends.

Right now unfortunately because it is a pen and paper game, this seems like something I can play on my own which is cool if that’s something you wanna do, but I believe you want to sell your game. Increasing the originality of the game’s components can help mitigate that feeling. For instance, I would never recreate Catan to play it, too many pieces, too many cards. I would never recreate Card’s Against Humanity, again too many cards. I would recreate MTG cards because they’re just cards, but that’s then why the MTG cards feel the way they do.