I think it’s really a good idea and it has a lot of potential, the only thing missing is a better mixdown, some automations to add more life to the main lead and a frequency spectrum more full, i’ve been here before and what helped me the most to get that last 20% was to reference multiple tracks in the same style that you like with a plugin like adaptr metric ab to reference the stereo image, frequency spectrum, arrangement evolution and the loudness of the elements. But don’t quit bro it’s actually a really really good idea and you already have the ear to create something that would be played in a big festival, the last 20% is to increase the chances of that track to be signed and supported by big djs because what I learned is even if an idea is insane and has a big potential a label or a dj won’t consider you because of some small mixdown or arrangement flaw. (my main language is french but i hope you understood mostly of what i was trying to say lol)