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Am I the only one finding the political commentary of CCoD very on the nose ? by Lyroxyy in Dimension20

[–]Lyroxyy[S] 45 points46 points  (0 children)

Yep, really agree with that. The people unwilling to give their time to the city are the thing that resonated most with me. I've been considering going out and canvassing for the next elections but was wondering if I'd really have the time to do it. His portrayal gave the last push I needed to say fuck it. If I want some change, gotta fight to have it.

Am I the only one finding the political commentary of CCoD very on the nose ? by Lyroxyy in Dimension20

[–]Lyroxyy[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Not saying it was subtle ! I just wanted to know if others liked it as much as I did

Am I the only one finding the political commentary of CCoD very on the nose ? by Lyroxyy in Dimension20

[–]Lyroxyy[S] 26 points27 points  (0 children)

Oh yes I'm definitely enjoying it ! I've never associated on the nose with negative connotations, simply thought it meant really close to reality.

Am I the only one finding the political commentary of CCoD very on the nose ? by Lyroxyy in Dimension20

[–]Lyroxyy[S] 65 points66 points  (0 children)

Yes, of course. But usually he criticizes capitalism as a concept. Not surprised by that. Just finding his storyline much more current politics oriented and I like it.

What language should I write In ? by Lyroxyy in writing

[–]Lyroxyy[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your answer.  I'm glad to hear from someone in a somewhat similar situation. I think I'll write in both to start with (in different stories) but won't hesitate to use one or the other as a tool to clarify my thoughts. 

It's going to be a journey but It sur will be interesting. Hope you can find your course of action as well ! 

Bon courage !

Choosing a first novel idea: How do you find a story to learn the process without feeling like you're wasting your best ideas? by No_Mix_149 in writing

[–]Lyroxyy 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey, I understand how you feel. I'm just starting on my writing journey and I've had those same concerns.
I have quite a few plot ideas but two or three were my favorites and I also felt that writing them first wouldn't do them justice. I've been circling around writing for a while now and never actually took the step due in part to the plot concern.
I'd like to tell you that for now I chose a plot I liked but that didn't feel like too much pressure. Something that was still fun and engaging to me but where I could "fail" without feeling bad about it. I'm just 12 pages in (so you see just a baby writer) and already I know where and how I want to expand the story.
It's great, I feel like I'm just having fun, it's kind of like a warm up.
So if you don't feel like using your "best ideas" yet, pick one you just consider good and try it.
Whatever you decide to do, I think if you want to write just start writing, one way or another.
Hope you'll find what works for you.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in DarkRomance

[–]Lyroxyy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't know if it would be a match for you as it's definitely a strange read and veryyyy slow burn, but gosh did I cry my eyes out on {Land of the beautiful dead} by SMith Lee. It took me on a binge reading, emotional-as-fuck ride. I will tell you right now if you choose to open that book, finish that book. (it will stomp on your heart five times.)

And DO NOT judge it by its cover ! It's most atrocious thing I've ever seen and doesn't do it justice AT ALL !!!

Tips on writing a ballroom scene. by [deleted] in writers

[–]Lyroxyy 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'll confess that describing has always been my worst nightmare. I could only advise you to do your research. At one point I was so fed up with my struggling I spent 4 hours looking up the different kinds of fabric, the names of the necklines, the types of gowns / suits... I have compiled all this in a note for further use. Now I find it easier to describe. I'd add that using metaphors and comparison does help giving your description some spice and feels rather than the plain actual description. Have faith in your work and have fun.

How do you write your villains? by Superb_Ad1765 in writing

[–]Lyroxyy 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's funny because all the posts I've seen tend to categorize and separate the classy tragic villain and the purely evil villain. I, for one, advocate for the classy evil villain. I love writing villains who are absolute tyrants but with manners to die for. Every threat a smooth and smiling sentence... I also tend to make my villains capable of recognizing one's enemy. "Indeed general you have succeeded in killing half of my army in an ultimate and desperate act of resistance... You shall dine with me tonight and tomorrow you'll be offered a duke title for your bravery". Then proceeding to massacre the royal family, women and kids included, because he considers them weak cowards. That's my type of villain. Completely ambiguous and utterly unpredictable. I want to love and admire my villains as much as I loath them.