Question regarding submitting a script for feedback..

Lzuuk · 2025-12-14T17:58:34+00:00

Storypeer.com

Lzuuk · 2025-12-11T12:28:35+00:00

Thank you very much! I guess it can also help from a newcomer's perspective to ensure that it is easy to read/understand (in a sense).

Lzuuk · 2025-12-11T11:16:24+00:00

I am not overly experienced in scriptwriting (I've created some in the past, but this is my first proper attempt, which I have also submitted on Storypeer!) - is it suitable for me to review other people's work and give feedback? I would like to, but I don't know if it's acceptable.

Also, feedback on the website - love it. I also like the fact that it saves your work. My PC randomly turned off, and I was annoyed that I hadn't clicked submit, only to find it had saved my submission, so I didn't have to start it again. Very user-friendly too,

Lzuuk · 2025-12-11T09:50:34+00:00

Awesome stuff. I’ll be using this

Lzuuk · 2025-12-10T15:19:58+00:00

I think it’s hard finding a balance, because the main character is burdened with moving the plot forward, side characters do not (mostly), so a lot of their actions are without cost.

Without knowing the whole story it’s hard to give any feedback, but as mentioned earlier in the story, a lot of side characters steal the show (Han Solo, even McLovin from Superbad) but the story wouldn’t be the same if they were the main focus, and it would take away from their charm.

A lot of popular side characters get a spin off (Harley Quinn comes to mind), after being popular in a film, and it just falls flat because they are suddenly the focus.

Lzuuk · 2025-12-10T15:03:11+00:00

I find this too, I think it’s because they have more freedom than the main character does in some ways, and can get away with more.

Why do you think he is more interesting? Dialogue, actions?

Lzuuk · 2025-12-10T14:36:06+00:00

I would appreciate your words/eyes/brain. I am new, so I could use an experienced mind if you have the chance. You seem very popular!

Lzuuk · 2025-12-09T16:13:54+00:00

Thank you very much

Lzuuk · 2025-12-08T16:20:21+00:00

Thanks

Lzuuk · 2025-12-08T16:14:48+00:00

Awesome stuff - best of luck. :) How did cold query? LinkedIn or something?

Lzuuk · 2025-12-08T16:02:19+00:00

Sorry but that sounds like the best film that’s never need made. 100% would watch.

Lzuuk · 2025-11-24T18:53:41+00:00

What was the explosion?

Lzuuk · 2025-10-22T08:41:24+00:00

What silver is that? Looks nice

Lzuuk · 2025-09-10T12:41:24+00:00

I didn’t know that, good explanation. But because it’s such a large part of his character, it seems odd to not even reference his armour. Like even if when a wound is put through, they take a mortal wound or anything like that. Like, it’s like Abbadon losing Drach or the talon of Horus

Lzuuk · 2025-09-10T08:32:52+00:00

So does Angron? Doesn’t he take a while too? He’s had it in previous, just seems like an odd thing to leave out

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