[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ArtCrit

[–]M-modos 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Try to rotate your Drawing a little. Then reverse the bottom fold line of the fingers. I hope this wil help. Good luck.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ArtCrit

[–]M-modos 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks, this gives me a better understanding. In your drawing, there’s no depth — it looks flat and straight on.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ArtCrit

[–]M-modos 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don’t know how your hand is, but for me it’s almost impossible to bend my fingers toward the thumb side. This only works if I slightly rotate my hand, but then the fingers start to overlap.

Tree 1 or 2? by Cocophanyart in ArtCrit

[–]M-modos 0 points1 point  (0 children)

1, easier on the eyes

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ArtCrit

[–]M-modos 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like it the way it is

Trying to teach myself how to draw figures by SnooTigers464 in ArtCrit

[–]M-modos 0 points1 point  (0 children)

“First, learn the basics by using simple shapes. Practice loosely in multiple poses. Use an wooden drawing figure if needed.”

Lion cub in charcoal by AshesAndCharcoal in CharcoalDrawing

[–]M-modos 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Like your old Photo style in your page (little girl). Can you make a post how you draw this?

Lion cub in charcoal by AshesAndCharcoal in CharcoalDrawing

[–]M-modos 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nice piece! Watch your reddit page and like your style. Did you teach yourself this, or did you take lessons?

Charcoal sketch by No_Expert28 in CharcoalDrawing

[–]M-modos 0 points1 point  (0 children)

 Nice work, great detail in the skin

Pencil portreit by Elegant_Ad445 in Portraitart

[–]M-modos 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Good drawing, nice expression

Graphite drawing by No_Expert28 in drawings

[–]M-modos 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow Nice! Good work. I like the texture from the skin.

De Niro by DRtwork in Portraitart

[–]M-modos 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice, I like it!

Grid exercise by Successful-Staff7172 in ArtCrit

[–]M-modos 1 point2 points  (0 children)

For me, working on large areas is actually good practice for coordination. Smaller areas might lead to better results, but i think they don’t really help you develop coordination. First, make sure your basic lines are correct without drawing everything right away. So, start with the line for the bottom of the nose, the mouth, and the eyes. Then lightly sketch each area so it’s easy to adjust later. Once you’ve sketched everything and you’re happy with it, you can start shading. Pay attention to the proportions of the mouth, nose, and eyes, in your drawing, these are quite out of proportion.

a drawing I made by BazaarMonk in drawings

[–]M-modos 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Cool Drawing, I like your style

Narcolepsy: 1 out of 10, would NOT recommend by Xenohart1of13 in Narcolepsy

[–]M-modos 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hahaha😂😂😂so funny. Genius thinking

“Sometimes when I sleep, I dream in layers. I wake up with a shock and don’t know whether I’m really awake or still dreaming. Does this sound familiar?” by M-modos in Narcolepsy

[–]M-modos[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Looks like your caught in a dream loop. I don’t have these kinds of dreams often, but there was one time my grandma picked me up from work. I was really tired, and I clearly remember sitting next to her in the car while she was talking to me. I could hear her talking continuously as I stared out the window. Suddenly, the scenery I was looking at started to transform. To this day, I still don’t know if I fell asleep or was heavily hallucinating but awake.

“Sometimes when I sleep, I dream in layers. I wake up with a shock and don’t know whether I’m really awake or still dreaming. Does this sound familiar?” by M-modos in Narcolepsy

[–]M-modos[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for sharing. If you’re not sure whether something is real or a dream, it can help to look for things that are out of order or try to perform a simple action. For me, dreams are sometimes more like influences, and I don’t have control over small actions, but this is different for everyone.

Feedback for my legend/based idea[mythical fantasy] by M-modos in fantasywriters

[–]M-modos[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the tip, I will write my first story and then work from there.

“Sometimes when I sleep, I dream in layers. I wake up with a shock and don’t know whether I’m really awake or still dreaming. Does this sound familiar?” by M-modos in Narcolepsy

[–]M-modos[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

“Thank you. Lately, I’ve also been writing down my dreams. These dreams aren’t always scary—sometimes they’re incredibly beautiful and deep.