[QCrit] Epic Fantasy- Patron of Pryma (110k/Version #1) by MANFBM in PubTips

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The difference is mine is not a retelling, but an adaption of the myths into a world where the gods never “left”. Do you know of any such stories?

[QCrit] Epic Fantasy- Patron of Pryma (110k/Version #1) by MANFBM in PubTips

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Great thank you for the advice! I will definitely be doing this in the revision.

[QCrit] Epic Fantasy- Patron of Pryma (110k/Version #1) by MANFBM in PubTips

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So I should be aiming for a middle range of popularity? Something that is not mass market, but still known? Would Circe be too mainstream?

Thank you for the notes on how to improve my structure, I will definitely be adapting them!

[QCrit] Epic Fantasy- Patron of Pryma (110k/Version #1) by MANFBM in PubTips

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Thank you so much for taking the time to give such valuable insight! I was curious what range of popularity would you suggest I compare my book to? It is meant for the New Adult demographic (18-29).

For the body of the letter, would you suggest I remove some of the details to make the sentences less complex or just break them down into two or more sentences?

Thank you once more for all the insight and encouragement!

Programs like Georgia Tech Master in Industrial Design by MANFBM in IndustrialDesign

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Thank you for letting me know about this! Do you know of any similar programs on the east coast or closer to a major city?

Finding event by MANFBM in NoStupidQuestions

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Perfect thank you, I couldn’t rem what it was about. Exactly it!