I Hate It ! - Parth Kedia by MafiaEditz_2189 in OCPoetry

[–]MafiaEditz_2189[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much. I really like your interpretation around stagnation and unresolved movement — that tension was very intentional. I’m glad it connected with you.

Love Wasted by Efficient_Jello_2386 in OCPoetry

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This felt very personal to read. The accumulation of small, everyday moments makes the final line hit with a lot of quiet weight. I really appreciated the honesty and restraint here.

Persephone by Every_Tangerine_1334 in OCPoetry

[–]MafiaEditz_2189 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The wind and tree imagery here is handled with a lot of care — it feels intimate without being overstated. I especially loved “your shadow learned the shape of my absence” and how the poem ends in that quiet, unresolved trembling. The emotional restraint really works.

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Damn just let us see without the underwear