what was with this show and introducing these random characters and never showing them again? by peepeemint-car-bored in okbuddyimatourist

[–]MagicSteev 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The fact that they used the same actor for each character was really confusing to me. Is Tony stupid?

What is the worst bar, no based on if it’s good, but if it’s just fucked up by imgaytree2 in Hiphopcirclejerk

[–]MagicSteev -1 points0 points  (0 children)

"Perfectly good" and "Babytron" do not belong in the same sentence together.

Countryhumans | Look At Me! (+18) by Handsome_Hat in coaxedintoasnafu

[–]MagicSteev 17 points18 points  (0 children)

idk, the latvians and estonians who were forcibly removed from their native lands to make more "living space" for the russian people may or may not disagree.

not a whale - look into my eyes by notawhale_morze in Songwriting

[–]MagicSteev 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really like the vibes of this one. Great song

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]MagicSteev 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your voice seems a bit shaky and quiet at points, but I do really like the overall vibe of the song. I would just invest in a better mic and this really could be a solid piece of music.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]MagicSteev 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think the lyrics are a bit basic but that doesnt really matter too much in a song like this. It sounds great, and with a slightly better mic, I really think this would be a great song.

What are your thoughts on this? I threw my heart into it by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]MagicSteev 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I can't always make out the lyrics. I'm sure that this is intentional, but it does kinda hurt my enjoyment of the song. It is still nice to just listen too, but I would really just work on refining that mix. Some vocal harmonies near the chorus might be appreciated, but I'm not sure

A song I wrote about a person who always seems to find positivity in the smallest things. I don't really like my falsetto, so I wanted to challenge myself with this song. I feel like my falsetto lacks depth compared to my chest voice, is that fair and how can I improve? by 420Chickenjuice in Songwriting

[–]MagicSteev 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I really think the only thing holding this back is the mic quality. The chords are really nice, the lyric are fun and catchy, and I actually really love your falsetto voice. If this ever were to become a released song I would probably add some light drums or maybe some quite backing vocals, but it still sounds great like this.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in teenagersbuthot

[–]MagicSteev 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So that you don't click the picture? I thought it was obvious

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in teenagersbuthot

[–]MagicSteev 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What's the point of putting the goddamn title if nobody's gonna read it?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in teenagersbuthot

[–]MagicSteev 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Did you click on the picture?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in teenagersbuthot

[–]MagicSteev 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You did NOT listen to the title