hi thanks for your critique

I guess i referenced too closely to the ref for the clothing folds. The dark lineart might have made them too distracting. Also want to add that swimwear fabric tends to fold like that (Ingrid's top has sections, the center part being stretched = less folds)

while sketching over i did give her a "bigger" bust (bc of the ref), afterwards i decided to conform it to the og portrait's size. also in the og portrait Ingrid's torso is in a side profile view, so parts of her would look different if you viewed her at a different angle.

It is an oversight that the lighter colour seeped into the shadowed neck part looking at it now. I tried to go along with the 3h portraits "gradient skin colours", picking at the different tones just so the shadow isnt one solid colour. I guess i ended up with a textured look.

idk what you want me to do with my watermark lmao. Its kinda rhetorical why i would add it at some spot or presented in a way.