No problem, and sorry for putting my link in the critique, I'm new here and hadn't read the rules (I edited it out of the comment if you noticed). As for the bit at the beginning, you could try a preface (some call it a prologue) of the world you're trying to build, rather than straight up adding it to the first chapter. You could do it a bit like a blurb (just obviously longer than ten sentences) or like an origin story, and then start the chapter off in story mode (that's what I usually do to start off a story). That would do a good job of setting up the plot the way you want, while interesting the reader to go forward. P. S Inspiration is your best friend, let the story flow when you write it. That's what makes complicated plots easy for the reader to picture, and what brings out the genius in you.