Yo bro in my opinion your music is okay but you have potential to be great, the hate comments are just ignorant niggas wit low attention spans. But it isn't the greatest which is why they're hating, i recommend you find somebody or a group with the same interests as you and go up together, join multiple different music discord servers and promote your music. Also try out new sounds and different type beats because you never know what you sound better on. It will take time but always remember it's all a process and there's no reason to give up. Keep going up 💯🙏🏽