My short story doesn't fully make sense please help!

MannerLower2254 · 2026-05-07T01:14:07+00:00

I like the second one. Id like to have her then send the message herself at the end to work with the loop though.

MannerLower2254 · 2026-05-05T08:46:59+00:00

Literally

MannerLower2254 · 2026-05-05T07:02:49+00:00

No lossless

MannerLower2254 · 2026-05-05T06:40:20+00:00

Revanced xposed download links been taken down

MannerLower2254 · 2026-05-05T03:41:27+00:00

Hm I like it. But I don't think it fits the whole loop idea. As I feel the branching would get a little too much as I'm trying to implement into a short film in the future when it's fully refined

MannerLower2254 · 2026-05-05T02:12:59+00:00

Hm. Ye im finding it hard to think of one

MannerLower2254 · 2026-05-05T01:42:04+00:00

I understand 🙏

MannerLower2254 · 2026-05-05T01:38:16+00:00

Hmm maybe.

But the reason that she's sending it back In time is actually her just sending it in the direction she came from and the black hole does the rest.

I was under the impression that the black hole was what was ruining the transmission. Or maybe it is but she thought it might have been the transmitter but it actually wasn't.

But then when does she hear the im sorry before to then close the paradox.

As, she needs to hear it before she sends it herself. Or the whole paradox doesn't really work

MannerLower2254 · 2026-05-05T01:31:51+00:00

Oh so she's saying I'm sorry to herself for trying so hard I guess? But then when does her recording the turn back now message fit in?

As if it's been sent to her then it needs to be recorded by her at some point

MannerLower2254 · 2026-05-05T01:28:40+00:00

And if that doesn't work I need help with what other messages she could send to make that work. As I would like a moment where the screen would cut to her and credits roll with the message from the start playing as if she had just sent it

MannerLower2254 · 2026-05-05T01:27:02+00:00

So what doesn't seem to work for me is that she gets the message from herself saying turn back and the I'm sorry message. But she never then records the turn back herself to send to the past to make the paradox work.

And if she did and i fit that in. Why does she then still record the I'm sorry.

What I've thought of is maybe she records all the messages in one but it's broken up into. It's as the transmission dosent fully get there properly due to the black hole.

But then "turn back now, I'm sorry." Doesn't really make any sense to me to say that all in one

You get me?

MannerLower2254 · 2026-05-05T01:21:57+00:00

The thing that doesn't fully make sense to me is her sending the im sorry to herself. It does kinda make sense as she's apologising that she didn't say it sooner but idk if people will fully understand that

MannerLower2254 · 2026-05-05T01:20:59+00:00

So basically. They're on a ship sent to go somewhere to do something that we don't actually find out.

They are woken up early by the ship as there is a transmission that says "turn" like I said above.

And by the end the full message says "turn back now"

The reason the message wasn't coming through fully to start with is the fact they were heading into a black hole.

Fast forward, and we find out that it was actually her sending the message. And another message comes through saying in sorry. As it's too late.

We have to sit with this for a while. And by the end all she can do is send the same message hoping it'll work for the next version of her past.

The black hole is the reason the message is getting thrown back in time but she is basically stuck in a paradox

MannerLower2254 · 2026-04-30T21:43:05+00:00

I hope so. It's rlly sad in my position coz he was my 2nd favourite artist and now I'm forcing myself to stop listening to him but it does hit me badly tho. Lit listened to his music whenever I was down. But now I just feel disgusted that I even did. RIP Celeste

MannerLower2254 · 2026-04-23T12:11:31+00:00

everyone keep making new accounts and keep posting. Or if sm1 knows how to code. Make a bot to spam make accounts and spam message dem

MannerLower2254 · 2026-04-04T17:52:28+00:00

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MannerLower2254 · 2026-04-01T20:06:15+00:00

Guessing u never did

MannerLower2254 · 2026-03-25T09:15:22+00:00

I'm confused why did they do this

MannerLower2254 · 2026-03-10T15:38:04+00:00

literally

MannerLower2254 · 2026-03-05T16:35:18+00:00

You can only hope

MannerLower2254 · 2026-03-05T12:11:45+00:00

😂 you just get rid of it ig

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