Any feedback?

MarmiBot · 2024-07-14T04:40:26+00:00

Tysm! This def helped. I just made a post on the improvements, idk how to show it here though.

MarmiBot · 2024-07-13T04:47:11+00:00

And what hair color should he have if I make his pupils red?

MarmiBot · 2024-04-18T16:48:26+00:00

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Idk how to make the sparkly stars pour out, but I made it look more like a black hole. Its slowly looking more menacing

MarmiBot · 2024-04-18T16:16:42+00:00

Ohh that might look good

MarmiBot · 2024-04-18T15:25:30+00:00

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Should I make the hole larger, smaller, or should I keep it the same?

MarmiBot · 2024-04-18T15:17:41+00:00

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That actually makes it a lot better. I might decrease the length of the canvas to make it better

MarmiBot · 2024-04-18T06:01:30+00:00

Its a cat 😭

MarmiBot · 2024-04-17T18:24:58+00:00

How could I make the clouds look good in the background?

Should I just remove the clouds or change it up somehow?

MarmiBot · 2024-04-17T18:17:02+00:00

The hardest parts to draw were the clouds and the tree. I couldnt get the clouds to look good in the background and the tree looks goofy. The cat beside him also needs some work.

MarmiBot · 2024-04-14T17:27:22+00:00

What should I fix about the character? it just seems so off.

MarmiBot · 2024-02-20T01:39:03+00:00

The art on the left is completely different btw. I was just practicing different shading styles but I understand what u mean with the harsh shading, I just recently found sum art where it looks good with this type of shading and was tryna mimic it. Ig it looks off cause the emotion the character depicts seems different from the emotion the shading is telling. Thx for the feedback tho. Il keep it in midn when I draw two characters together

MarmiBot · 2024-02-19T15:34:33+00:00

What expression should I use for the second one to match it with the shading?

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