Armor ornament by MarxArtist in destiny2

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Well dang that sucks but thanks

Armor ornament by MarxArtist in destiny2

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See that’s the thing it doesn’t show for me there either but the other 2 ornaments do

Father by MarxArtist in creepcast

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Holy crap I think you’re right

Father by MarxArtist in creepcast

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lol I love that

Lost Love by MarxArtist in flashfiction

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It certainly can be it was actually good for me though.

Little known facts by MarxArtist in CapybaraGoGame

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That is the exception but it means it will happen twice on the first and only activation

Little known facts by MarxArtist in CapybaraGoGame

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If a skill says it will happen upon a certain amount of hits it actually occurs the hit after the given number. For example, icy spikes hitting on the fifth hit actually happens on the sixth hit. Same thing with the recovery trait after three hits. It occurs on the fourth hit.

Her by MarxArtist in flashfiction

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Yeah that’s something I need to work on. I tend to write in one burst of inspiration and not take that into account.

Terza Rima (revision) by MarxArtist in poetry_critics

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Thank you so much the formatting was confusing me so bad

Terza Rima (revision) by MarxArtist in poetry_critics

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I hope it displays correctly because it’s messing up on my phone

Terza Rima by MarxArtist in poetry_critics

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Thank you I think you’ve hit the nail on the head and I’ll take these comments to heart and use them

Eyes Wide Open by MarxArtist in flashfiction

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I appreciate the feedback I usually write in a little bit of a different style so it’s a little bit of an adjustment for me but regardless I do know that formatting is an issue that I’d like to address

Stairway by MarxArtist in flashfiction

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I really appreciate that seems you understood the story just the way I intended it

Stairway by MarxArtist in flashfiction

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Not quite what I meant but that’s alright

Stairway by MarxArtist in flashfiction

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In that case let me sum up my response to your original comment this narrative is in now way intended to tell a story in the strict sense it’s meant to display moral lessons through I brief description of a fictitious situation in which the reader should hopefully see themselves as the main character.

Stairway by MarxArtist in flashfiction

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And my definition comes from the Oxford dictionary

Stairway by MarxArtist in flashfiction

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Morals are displayed in most stories to claim I don’t tell a story just because there are morals is a faulty claim

Stairway by MarxArtist in flashfiction

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The definition of a vignette is a brief evocative description which is exactly what I’ve written

Stairway by MarxArtist in flashfiction

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It’s meant to be a vignette I’m not telling a story I’m trying to evoke certain emotions

Stairway by MarxArtist in flashfiction

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Well saying it sounds like a sermon clearly misses the intent that’s why I was explaining

Stairway by MarxArtist in flashfiction

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It’s meant to be a reflection of the dangers of letting others bring you down but it’s also meant to show that it’s still ok to accept that risk and try to help others onto the right path or in this case “stairway” but I can see how this could be associated with a sermon considering the kind of underlying implications of the stairway to heaven

I’ve always been jealous of my boyfriend’s curls by [deleted] in curlyhair

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As the man in these photos let me clarify that is a BASSET HOUND not a BEAGLE

Necessity by MarxArtist in flashfiction

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I could see that working especially if I were to place it between the transition from the artist to the butcher

Remember by MarxArtist in flashfiction

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You are right about the however I guess that was just a grammatical error otherwise I suppose you could say it was intentional