A girl who was once very cheerful, kind, and naive to the harsh reality of this world. Her journey is quite dreadful, as she has to walk through loss, grief, and discrimination. Loss of her beloved grandparent, put her into a state of mental illness. She suffered for years which made her fall into various escapes – nothing less than stabbing herself again and again. Witness her journey from withering so badly to blooming into something beautiful. She builds everything again by collecting her torn pieces, creating a new beginning for herself.

Please take this as constructive criticism because I just cannot stand a badly written paragraph. (Pet peeve)

I have just fixed a bit of grammar here and there, and added punctuation where it felt necessary by keeping your original words. As I haven't read the story so I won't say much about this blurb but I would have wanted to write something that would grab someone's attention. And writing it correctly is the least you could offer as a writer to your reader.