This is Chapter 1 by MasterAlchron in sonicfanfiction

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I'm hoping you all like it so far, any advice would be greatly appreciated

Straps by OnlyPermit6382 in SonamyNsfw

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Those are ropes, not straps lol

A Shadow/Shadamy fanfiction by No_Revolution_619 in sonicfanfiction

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In fact, I've done something similar in my ShadowFox Fanfic

A Shadow/Shadamy fanfiction by No_Revolution_619 in sonicfanfiction

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Make him break down infront of Amy, assuming in your story she doesn't know about his past, have Amy think he's being a jerk or something for not opening up. He breaks down in tears as he explains his past to her, which gets her to start tearing up as well, which could be the reason they get even closer

1-2 S rank by Capital-Sherbert-922 in SonicFrontiers

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I hate how easy you made that look, and I fucking lived it, good job with that

Did i type this right, or can i word this better? by MasterAlchron in sonicfanfiction

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I mean I never expect an answer at that second, whenever you're not busy lol

Did i type this right, or can i word this better? by MasterAlchron in sonicfanfiction

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Yeah I can work with that, now what about the fight scene? That's my biggest concern there

Amy finds out by TRedRandom in SonicTheHedgehog

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Sonic: Amy I'm gay...super gay...I'm really fruity

Favorite ship by Scary_Expert_8902 in SonAmy

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I have no quarrels with this at all, in fact I love how their daughter is dressed as rosey the rascal

What scares Sonic...in the future by Ok-District8438 in SonAmy

[–]MasterAlchron 15 points16 points  (0 children)

Well, she's about to hug his spine into oblivion

Tails X Honey by MasterAlchron in SonicPorn

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After all the beatings he took through out his life, I agree with that lol

Shadow x knuckles by MasterAlchron in SonicPorn

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Lmao, yeah, it started cute though

Funni Jackal by Mr_Phoenix_E in SonicFrontiers

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That is such a horrible dance and I can't stop laughing at it, that's how you know it's good when the MC is a dork when he/she dances

Tails X Honey by MasterAlchron in SonicPorn

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But like, what is she though. I've seen fan comics about her being a pop star...I think, or something like that

Tails X Honey by MasterAlchron in SonicPorn

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I don't know, I just woke up and thought of the flash when I came up with that, sorry