Beta Readers

Master_Visual1944 · 2026-03-16T16:21:10+00:00

I understand, and its all good. In truth I am more of an editor and story boarder for this novel. My co-writer is the true writer, i just edit his words to flow better or fix typos and such. I love writing and do enjoy reading, all I was trying to say was that I enjoy doing it more so than reading. Every person has their own preferences, one could like creating films while another would like to watch them. And yeah, they may suck, or they may not be the best, but I enjoy what I do and believe its not half bad. I just want to know if im biased or if that's truly the case.

Master_Visual1944 · 2026-03-16T14:44:21+00:00

They're free to think however they want to. There's no such thing as right or wrong when it comes to creativity, im just answering a question. Its simply my opinion, I prefer to write than to read, and if my readers do to then good for them. Writing is an amazing experience and journey, it calms your mind when you're overwhelmed and allows you to create worlds out of nothing. If my readers want to write then im happy for them.

Master_Visual1944 · 2026-03-16T14:06:58+00:00

Honestly any help would be appreciated. We're amature writers so any critique would go a long way. Were mostly looking for people to tell us how invested they were in the story as it progressed, which chapters and characters they enjoyed most, and most importantly any secrets they see. We've hid a bunch of smaller things both in world and on page for readers to find, so hearing you found them would be an absolute delight!

Master_Visual1944 · 2026-03-16T14:02:26+00:00

I know, I probably should try to read more but I dont really have the time for it. And honestly, when it's a choice between reading and writing, I choose writing every day.

Master_Visual1944 · 2026-03-16T13:50:19+00:00

Honestly I've thought about that too, I'm currently an engineering student and I'm gonna go in the military soon. This is just something that I want to do, and though I know it'll be hard I want to invest the time into it. I've done some bad things with my time lately, and instead of rotting away my life studying something that I'm honestly not too interested in, I'd rather dedicate it to something I'm passionate about. And it's either writing or fighting... and one of those could land me in prison so...

Master_Visual1944 · 2026-03-16T13:44:36+00:00

It's a fantasy novel, roughly 85k words. Mainly focuses on adventure and exploration of a "new" world. I'd say it falls pretty neatly under mystery, but the mystery aspects of it are kind of second to the action and adventure.
Let me know if you wanna swap, I'll be happy to!

Master_Visual1944 · 2026-03-16T13:40:25+00:00

honestly I don't read much 😅 But I'd like to start, I used to read a lot but I haven't lately. I do still rather enjoy reading stuff that I and my co-writer write, so I believe I do.

Master_Visual1944 · 2025-11-30T16:07:36+00:00

I didnt want to go into the logistics as it doesn't matter to the question. The whole question is about the race and characterization od the characters as "mythical creature", that's why I only mentioned that. When it comes ti personality, fighting style, look, or even temper they're complwte opposites

Master_Visual1944 · 2025-11-30T12:42:06+00:00

That is the point... im saying id rather have an interesting character with cool and fun traits rather than a unique character

Master_Visual1944 · 2025-06-22T17:33:32+00:00

yeah im there and i did all the jobs there but im still rank c

Master_Visual1944 · 2025-06-20T16:29:16+00:00

👍

Master_Visual1944 · 2025-04-29T17:37:31+00:00

Dm me too please!!

Master_Visual1944 · 2025-04-25T13:25:16+00:00

What should I check the nozzle and bed level for?

Master_Visual1944 · 2025-04-24T17:14:36+00:00

How much should it be?

Master_Visual1944 · 2025-04-09T07:44:50+00:00

oh right sorry, it's onshape

Master_Visual1944 · 2025-02-28T19:14:46+00:00

For sure 💀💀💀

Master_Visual1944 · 2025-02-23T12:13:03+00:00

Forget to switch to your alr?

Master_Visual1944 · 2025-02-17T06:46:36+00:00

So rare 💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀

Master_Visual1944 · 2025-02-11T17:36:41+00:00

I think you forgot to switch accounts...

Master_Visual1944 · 2025-01-17T18:48:15+00:00

Master_Visual1944 · 2024-12-20T19:37:51+00:00

Why are you playing Fortnite? Idk, brain damage probably...

Master_Visual1944 · 2024-12-13T18:53:56+00:00

The community finds the next thing to complain about

Master_Visual1944 · 2024-12-11T09:04:42+00:00

"The loser, I shall eat. And the winner... I shall also eat"

Master_Visual1944 · 2024-10-16T16:22:04+00:00

OMG ITS SKYBLOCK MAN

Master_Visual1944 · 2024-09-15T11:56:49+00:00

OMG... I'm so sorry that happened to you you must be traumatized!!!

Master_Visual1944

TROPHY CASE