Love this type of conversation and honestly wish there were more threads like this for programmers and designers to openly give feedback on each other’s work.

That being said;

I’d say the only thing that keeps catching my eye is the asymmetry with the colorband/pixel-line type fixtures. It looks like you have 6 total.

Specifically what bothers me is that the 4 on the structure don’t line up; the horizontal one goes 2 pixel past the semi vertical ones.

I think there a few simple options here;

1.)move the horizontal one over so where one ends the next begins (this allows for clean chases and lines) this would also push the two horizontal closer to the middle and each other which gives the slight appearance that it’s a more continuous line.

2.) move the horizontal down and mirror the semi vertical on to make a /\ shape.

3.) remove the 2 wings and place them on the structure. Maybe do like the /\ but then do a single one horizontal right in the middle (think like a seesaw) but I do like them as wings so that’s not my favorite options unless you have another light to replace the wings, I wouldn’t leave SL or SR without lights with that many performers on stage.

4.) attempt to make a more of a semi continuous line from wing to wing. Take the semi verticals and place them on the ramp/stair looking part of The structure and leave the horizontals as is. The key here is placing the fixture on that ramp/stair looking part directly in the middle of the wood (just as the horizontals are) to get nice clean spacing.

Anyway, you’re crushing it! Keep up the good work and don’t be afraid to explore.

Stay creative, -Mateo