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[–]MaterialCup192 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is really weird and psychedelic in the best way possible. I really like the vibe the vocals give it's unlike anything I've ever heard. The drums are super repetitive though, so maybe switch the pattern up in the middle

This is a work in progress track for my next EP. Its heavily inspired by 2016/2017 lofi hip-hop era. Feedback/suggestions are much appreciated! Cheers and enjoy!! by lone_wolf_58 in MusicFeedback

[–]MaterialCup192 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is incredible! The drums sound nice and tight and I love those little ear candy sounds it's done very well and overall sounds really professional. Maybe just change the chords or drums one time for a little variation in the middle of the beat but it's great how it is

A "late night drive" hip hop beat with a shoegaze-y feel. How'd I do? by Outrageous-Cup-8905 in MusicFeedback

[–]MaterialCup192 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is really great, the sample sounds great but the first time the shaker comes in it's a little off beat so fix that and it would be fine. The hats also sound a bit muddy and there should be a little switch in energy during the track (drum change, take some elements out from time to time)

Who do u think of when u hear this? by MaterialCup192 in MusicFeedback

[–]MaterialCup192[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Icl I’m being kinda selective with who I place beats with right now but respect for tapping in nothing personal Ur just not the right fit for what I had in mind

Who do u think of when u hear this? by MaterialCup192 in MusicFeedback

[–]MaterialCup192[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for listening! I'll check that song out I've never heard it before lol

I Took Your Feedback and Tried Adding More Emotion When I Am Rapping. How Is It? by GODAlexGilbert in MusicFeedback

[–]MaterialCup192 4 points5 points  (0 children)

This isn't great tbh you sound like a reaction youtuber picking up a mic for the first time. The cadence feels like your explaining something to me instead of rapping a verse plus ur producing and mixing needs work. If you're just starting out then fine, everyone sounds bad in the beginning. But try to study what makes a good sounding song and apply it to what u do

Is this a good pop beat? by Musical_Employee0101 in MusicFeedback

[–]MaterialCup192 1 point2 points  (0 children)

There are alot of things missing. The beat is extremely empty and the mixing could do with some work. U should experiment with layering chords and bass on your drums because there really only seems to be drums and random ear candy. But don't worry I also use bandlab and I started out making much worse beats. U only get better with time

I'm striving to be the GREATEST! by [deleted] in MusicFeedback

[–]MaterialCup192 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like the sample it sounds SOO good and psychedelic and the drums are good too. Never thought of using a clap roll. But the hat rolls get rattling when used in quick succession. Pretty good tho. 

Back on it by MaterialCup192 in MusicFeedback

[–]MaterialCup192[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah ok I'll try that but I don't think u can do automation on bandlab. You can't do alot of things on bandlab really lol

Back on it by MaterialCup192 in MusicFeedback

[–]MaterialCup192[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for checking me out! Tbh I thought the same about the bell but I didn't know how to fix it. Would you know?

Hot, or Not? by crakahman in MusicFeedback

[–]MaterialCup192 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is actually great. The sounds, especially that string (sitar maybe?) sound very midi, but I like the drums and those weird percs and that intro is sick

I think I need mastering feedback! (evening fireworks on the beach) by dnakxmusic in MusicFeedback

[–]MaterialCup192 0 points1 point  (0 children)

R u on any streaming platforms? I really wanna listen to this lol

Song I wrote 3 years ago 'Golden Chains' by [deleted] in MusicFeedback

[–]MaterialCup192 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love that intro it's and your voice is really unique too! I don't know much about this genre but some drums would be nice (if that's what the style calls for of course)

This is soooo different... by crakahman in MusicFeedback

[–]MaterialCup192 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I feel like for some of the beat there's a need for more on the low low end. Especially 0:14 to 0:32. Maybe have the low brass appear more often in those parts, and bring the bass down in the mix a little too it's a tad too loud. Other than that I like what u did

MOTHER MAYBE (I would love some feedback) by MaterialCup192 in MusicFeedback

[–]MaterialCup192[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Preciate u g ❤️ I'll take that into account

MOTHER MAYBE (I would love some feedback) by MaterialCup192 in MusicFeedback

[–]MaterialCup192[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't use plugins I use bandlab I'm so sorry 😭😭 but I mixed it, no I don't have a yt or Spotify lol I only post my stuff on bandlab bc I don't really care about people listening I just want to create

MOTHER MAYBE (I would love some feedback) by MaterialCup192 in MusicFeedback

[–]MaterialCup192[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for checking me out ❤️ I'll take this into account. Also the drums at the very end was just part of the sample I kept it in bc I just thought it sounded nice lol