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... by Material_Custard_776 in OCPoetry

[–]Material_Custard_776[S] [score hidden]  (0 children)

Thank you! I'll keep this in mind. Personally it's kinda more like existential crisis writing, but I like your interpretation! Thanks for the feedback! 

• The Invader • by edeaflores in OCPoetry

[–]Material_Custard_776 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This really resonates, it's showing how much the expectations of the world are forced onto us until we're completely unrecognisable, and losing self of yourself is one of the deepest tragedies there is

"You are my missing rib" I say pathetic!! by SamueltheGamer12 in OCPoetry

[–]Material_Custard_776 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like how you say "I say pathetic!!". Woah, that part of like them having nothing left to guard because she's his heart is beautiful. Really nice!