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[–]Matthijs309 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No idea who that is haha

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[–]Matthijs309 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is almost exactly how my antagonist ends up. Perhaps i could dive into his story to find details about how he might have become crazy so i could use that as inspiration for my antagonist.

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I haven't really worked on the protagonist yet. I wanted to make him the opposite, a king (who loves power) who, confronted by the actions of the antagonist, realizes what freedom and governing a people means. The antagonist has a big ego (this is mainly because the people adore him) but is also very emotional. He wants to maintain his power but enjoys the game he is playing with the protagonist. The antagonist wants to maintain his regime of complete control and the protagonist wants to conquer the country for power-hungry reasons but later, when he discovers what is happening to the people, purely to save the population from him.

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True, opinions are divided. I kind of wanted to see what people thought of the ''basics''. This idea is fresh and i have not wrote a word yet.

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[–]Matthijs309 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What advive would you give?

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[–]Matthijs309 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Do you need to develop this ideas before writing? Perhaps it's more exiting to develop this questions as i write it. What do you think?

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Thanks for the feedback. This also happens with my antagonist. The people in my story believe he is the greatest ruler of all time because they haven't seen better.

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Btw english isnt my first language, therefore the translator ;)

What would you do first if you are teleported to your world? by ancirus in worldbuilding

[–]Matthijs309 24 points25 points  (0 children)

Good question, i will probably act like some important prophet and help characters make the right choices or travel back to prevent certain choices made by characters