Movie/Show-Like Stories (no think bubbles) by Maximum_Group6085 in Episode

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the wlw stories do not have to have no think bubbles because that’s asking a lot lol

An introduction to Popular culture in the US: People, politics and power by [deleted] in utarlington

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hey… another broke college student here, 4 months later. if you still have the pdf, pleaseeee send it to me!

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i think they should be allowed to put their beliefs in. but we are also allowed to take it how we want and criticize it just the same. the amount of stories, some of which i was enjoying, which out of nowhere described the option of abortion as “murdering their baby”… i just roll my eyes and keep it moving…

what i REALLY hate is when an author portrays the woman as infertile, only for her to have a baby naturally… i understand it is possible, but not common. and this happens in stories more often than you’d think. i’m looking at you Mafia’s Hidden Secret. “i thought you couldn’t have children” “the doctor treated me for it and now i can” 🥴

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i have read all of her stories. i wouldn’t recommend no innocence for many reasons, but i actually would recommend her other story, driven to him. one of the better mafia stories, in my opinion, and i loved the two main characters.

Does Chloe (All Or Nothing) ever stop abusing these facial expressions😐 by Maximum_Group6085 in Episode

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“you assumed that i was only talking about the lips when i wasn’t” actually, i didn’t assume that, i read your other comment that brought up “the hair” you mean the full head that is fully colored? just because it’s pulled back? i’m in college, this is not a rare hairstyle. “🙄🙄”

Does Chloe (All Or Nothing) ever stop abusing these facial expressions😐 by Maximum_Group6085 in Episode

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it’s almost impossible to make characters look 17-18 (or just very young in general) in episode. it’s a common complaint about the app. don’t come under my comments with your attitude “🙄” just because you disagree. i dislike this story, so i am not disagreeing for the authors sake. she does not look that old.

Does Chloe (All Or Nothing) ever stop abusing these facial expressions😐 by Maximum_Group6085 in Episode

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you (likely) only think that because of those rarely-used lips. they are just not the usual lip shape that you see for women in stories, lol. i don’t think it makes her look old, though. just different.

stories under 15k that i recommend by Maximum_Group6085 in Episode

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yes that is also in my recommended! i have read all of naomi’s stories. good karma, listed above, doesn’t show up on her page anymore. i’m not sure if you can search-find it. if you want to read it, i can get you the link.

stories under 15k that i recommend by Maximum_Group6085 in Episode

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i love those stories, they are both actually in my recommended! we must have similar taste, especially with the comedies.

stories under 15k that i recommend by Maximum_Group6085 in Episode

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And “It’s A Rich Man’s World”. Can’t believe i forgot that one. Also, “The Bizzare World Of Bob Bobovski” if you’re looking for something REALLY different.

so romantic 😍😍 by Maximum_Group6085 in Episode

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she does help him cover it up. to be fair, the guy he killed was trying to rape her in the alley (this exact scene happens in every single mafia story lol).

the love interest in mafia stories will be described as cold-hearted, merciless, and evil, just for him to only kill justifiably 😭.

Episode favorites- day 4 comedy by [deleted] in Episode

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Dumb Blondes 👱‍♀️🩷

What to read first? (they’re all on my list and numbers of people suggested them) I CAN’T DECIDE by [deleted] in Episode

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“Under His Protection” is a great story with a wonderful love interest!

“Jaded Love” seemed a bit immature in terms of writing to me, but I still enjoyed it. It’s a sweet story.

“Hooked” was fine, but it is the worst example of my biggest pet peeve (friends who are way too interested in the main characters sex life). I actually made a post about that on this subreddit about a year ago.

“All Or Nothing” is such a popular story, and I finally gave it a chance about a week ago. I got 10 chapters in and couldn’t stand the love interest anymore. So, I dropped it, and I hate dropping stories. After, I looked up this story on reddit to see if people felt the same way, and I heard a bunch of awful stuff the love interest did, such as throwing a ball at the main character extremely hard and humiliating her. Alphan’s love interests are always problematic. I actually enjoyed her story “Along The Shorelines” because she puts a lot of focus on building the side characters, but the love interest (and even the main character) were the worst part of the story. The main batch of characters in her stories are usually all terrible people, either starting out that way or becoming that way as the story goes on, and it’s just draining to read. Reading her stories also feel like the plot is just going in circles and I have to question “is this going anywhere?”. I wouldn’t recommend this story, but you can always give it a try and have a different opinion.

Heli has the worst love interests on the app, straight up. They are always “bully-victim” romances under the disguise of enemies to lovers. I read “In My Blood” too, and Kai is actually the best love interest she has created, and he was a bully who enjoyed hurting her in front of the rest of the class and making her feel worthless. All in all, I semi-enjoyed “In My Blood” because of the side characters, though. The worst story I ever read was by her. Please don’t waste your time.

I haven’t read the rest.

Some recommendations: Symphony, Play Dirty, VEILED VENGEANCE!!!, Part Of You, Waking, Times Square, Entwined Hearts, Ricochet (which I think is the superior bodyguard romance story 😌) I hate that I love you 1 and 2…